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Review my Private SEO Service site.

Discussion in 'Black Hat SEO' started by akazzz, Apr 30, 2012.

  1. akazzz

    akazzz Regular Member

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    Hello BHW, *Mods please remove this if I'm violating any rules or if its in the wrong section.

    I need some BHW reviews, suggestions & advice about my private SEO service website.

    Reviews & suggestions on :-
    1. Service features
    2. Price of the service
    3. Is the homepage convincing to convert visitors to buyers?
    4. Should I change my homepage? or anything about the site?
    5. Anything you can think off.

    Code:
    [URL="http://www.penguinboxseo.com/"]www.penguinboxseo.com[/URL]
    I'm open to all your thoughts & ideas which will make my service & website better.
     
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  2. ComponY

    ComponY Newbie

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    I think the design could be better. Like the logo, you should have a rendered penguin.. The hover on nav items messes up, and some buttons on your site could be HTML/CSS instead of images. The service looks nice though..
     
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  3. akazzz

    akazzz Regular Member

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    Appreciate the feedback. I guess I need to look into a logo designer for the site. I've pm-ed you about the nav items.

    Still looking for any reviews or suggestions on how I can improve both the service and the site.

    I'm thinking whether should I change the site into just a 1 page sales page..Maybe that would have a better conversion rate?
     
  4. SneakyStevald

    SneakyStevald Newbie

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    I also think that the logo could be improved. On the testimonials page I think you should get rid of the penguin images. I didn't even realize they were quotes from customers at first.

    I guess you could test a 1-page site, but I think it's good as it is.
     
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  5. reallife

    reallife Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    Agree with the poster above - the site looks like you put it together in a WYSIWYG html editor, a few bucks into design could go a long way. There are uneven buttons that say "The" "Penguin" "Button" "Below" on your join page that look amateurish - and the "View Our Case Studies" bar on the index page covers some of the text on the window, at least in FF 3.6. Prices looked pretty good though.
    Good luck with it.
     
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  6. crashus

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    Site looks ripped to me, as logo is definitely was put after initial site design, and, logo is very bad by the way, you just need to get rid of it ASAP.

    Never use comic sans anywhere.

    Also - your slider must be "slidish", I'm in the middle of reading what your client got from you and all I can see in another second is dancing particles of your slider. Make it slide, not collapse.

    1\3 of the slider covered by slider parts and is less readable which is bad.

    AND for the best part, after I got into source code I easily find out that it is wordpress with one popular theme, which I prefer not to say but it can be obviously checkd out in no time. So that's not a ripped site but let's say, modified. In this case okay, just change logo and slider and you're done.

    Also whenever you'll be giving away review copies be sure to PM me ;)
     
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  7. akazzz

    akazzz Regular Member

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    Damn those replies & suggestions. Love it! :D Gonna make the necessary changes right away !
     
  8. ComputerEngineer

    ComputerEngineer Senior Member

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    I think you are not allowed to advertise your paid service like this without getting donor status and at this section