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Review My Landing Page

Discussion in 'Adwords' started by fung1990, Jul 8, 2011.

  1. fung1990

    fung1990 Power Member

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    finally decided start with adwords.
    just created a landing page promoting a health product from clickbank.

    need someone with experience to review it.

    i will send the link url to you:)
     
  2. Nordajgt

    Nordajgt Regular Member Premium Member

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    I'd be happy to take a look at it.
     
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    Nordajgt Regular Member Premium Member

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    Alright,

    So i took a look at it. The first thing i noticed is that it's got to much white space. You need to fill that with some things. Maybe testimonials, citations, references.

    Or just some color. You should really look at unbounce if you want to get some high quality easy to design landing pages.
     
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    adsterhome Regular Member

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    If your links is direct link from CB, your ads will be deny from Google Adwords !
     
  5. fung1990

    fung1990 Power Member

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    i just created a review page for a cb products.
    not direct linking.
     
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    thetraveller Senior Member

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    So you'll gonna have the clickbank hop link placed after your ad gets approved ? Or how you'll gonna do it?

    You can PM me your LP for a review.
     
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    Jeevs Supreme Member

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    Send me the URL and I will review it ;)
     
  8. fung1990

    fung1990 Power Member

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    using pretty link
     
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    thetraveller Senior Member

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    The page looks pretty good, I think on the top menu you can place a privacy page or something because with just the home button looks like an unfinished page.

    Also you can correct this error here : "It is LiveThisLive." I think it is LiveThisLife

    Good luck with your setup and keep us informed.
     
  10. LucidMarketing

    LucidMarketing Regular Member

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    That is simply not true. Direct linking is allowed as long as the landing page follows all the rules. CB products however are notorious for not complying.

    Read the Adwords rules and guidelines. Pay particular attention to the misleading and inaccurate claims section. I say this because you say it's a health product (not to mention a CB product). If it says something like "guaranteed cure", Google will not like that at all.