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Discussion in 'Black Hat SEO' started by AquaticGamer, Jun 12, 2013.

  1. AquaticGamer

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    Hi there people in the BlackHat Community :)! I recently created a website and i didn't know how this would appeal to people so i am requesting that you guys could help me rate this website and leave comments about it! Please rate it out of 10 as well thank you very much <3

    Website : http://www.viralsocialmedia.org
     
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    Hi AquaticGamer,

    I'll be more than happy to rate it. But may I suggest? :)
    I think it'll be easy for us to rate your site if you'll give us the areas you want us to rate.
    Such as:
    - Design
    - Speed of Loading
    - Content

    What do you think? Does that help? Let us know.
     
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  3. AquaticGamer

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    Yes most certainly :D If possible you could maybe even rate them out of 10 and a total score :D! Really appreciate this !
     
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    This website is not available.
    Cant rate.
     
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    Okay, then. I clicked that link and I got this: [h=1]Oops! Google Chrome could not find www.viralsocialmedia.com[/h]
    Is that the correct URL?
     
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    Its not loading for me.Is the website down?
     
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    Firefox can't find the server at www.viralsocialmedia.com.

    Are you sure its fixed?
     
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    I'd suggest getting yourself some fake likes to make your site look more legit. Maybe 3k-4k likes.
     
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    Not accessible.
     
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    Why are you iframing a weebly blog? Anyway it would look better if you could change the banner and add some links in footer.

    I would rate your site 5 out of 10
     
  14. AquaticGamer

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    It is made using weebly and its free :p I removed its footer at the bottom editing its html and css code :p
     
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    Here's my review of your site.

    1. Design
    I believe you're using Weebly's templates, aren't you?
    I'd recommend you to use WordPress themes so you can easily customize whatever needs changing.
    I'd suggest you to enhance or change that slider image (if that's a slider image on Weebly's template/theme).
    If you don't have time to re-design it, you may either have a Wanting to Hire (WTH) post on the Hire a Freelancer section or find one at the Marketplace -Web Design section.

    2. Load Time
    For the load time, I think I can give you an A for that - the same score I got from GMetrix. See the logs/stats here.

    3. Content
    Okay, here's my forte. In fairness, you used the third-person point of view. We also do that in our content writing service because it promotes a sense of accountability and responsibility before the eyes of your readers.

    On your home page, you have this:
    "Here, we provide one of the cheapest services that you can ever find out there in the market right now! If you try and look around, our prices are absolutely low! If you don't believe us, you can try us out! If you want trial service, we absolutely provide that :D! What are you waiting for? Purchase our packages now!"

    IMHO, you need to revise that for the following reasons:
    - It does not move me. There is (or 'are') a weak call-to-action (CTA) statement. Mind you, a CTA plays an important role whenever you write web contents. It should make your reader utter these words, "Why did I just come across this page only now?"
    - It does not steer my emotion. Be mindful that the purpose of writing, especially on pages that sell online services, is to make your readers feel and see that your primary objective is to help them in their business. Earning should be your secondary objective. I didn't feel that when I read that short paragraph on your home page.

    When you write your content, imagine yourself giving pieces of advice to a broken-hearted friend - sincere and honest.
    Highlight the 'What's-In-It-For-Me?' That's what your potential clients only care about.
    There are so many things I'd like to say here but I guess that'll be it for now.

    My overall score for you using all these three parameters is 5 out of 10.

    I hope my review helps you somehow. It's just me, anyway.

    iPBS
     
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    Thank you very much for your detailed reply :D! This i really helpful and i want to know if you or someone else could help me write something better at the front page because i am not a good writer myself :(
     
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    Hi AquaticGamer,

    I'm glad you appreciated my simple response.

    I don't want to be biased in just recommending my content writing services to you because of these two reasons:
    - It isn't allowed to self-promote in this section
    - There are so many talented writers in the Marketplace area of this forum

    But, if, after reading my simple reply above, you feel and see that I can walk the talk as far as content writing is concerned, let's just discuss it privately as I don't want our fellow forum members think that I'm just taking advantage of the situation. I'm just here to help. Please PM me your Skype ID if it isn't too much to ask. Thank you.

     
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    You need much much much more content.

    And change "cheapest services" to "most affordable services"

    You also need to put a Terms of Service page, Privacy Policy page, Disclaimer page, etc.




    Remove this... "Purchase our packages now!"



    Actually.... rewrite this entire thing.

    "Here, we provide one of the cheapest services that you can ever find out there in the market right now! If you try and look around, our prices are absolutely low! If you don't believe us, you can try us out! If you want trial service, we absolutely provide that :D! What are you waiting for? Purchase our packages now!"



    And as said above. Why are you iframing this? socialmediaboost.weebly.com
     
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    Thanks for reviewing it i got it! :D