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Rate my Copy Writing

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by SpellZ, Apr 10, 2009.

  1. SpellZ

    SpellZ Regular Member

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    Hey guys,

    I've written something up for my sales page and was wondering if anyone can go over it and review it. I promise you that it'll be a fun read, and it won't have none of those, "BUT WAIT! THERE IS MORE!" type things..

    I made it sound like a story to drag the person who is reading it.. inside the story. To make him relate to it, etc. So far 3 people read it over, but I need a little more feedback

    If anyone is interested, post here and I'll PM it to you


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  2. WhiteHatConvert

    WhiteHatConvert Registered Member

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    lol

    So, only people with a shit load of posts can rate your copy? haha

    You should be happy if anyone is willing to look at it and give you some
    feedback.

    I'm sure the admins/mods/serious posters will be beating down your PM box for the opportunity to critique your copy for free :)
     
  3. SpellZ

    SpellZ Regular Member

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    Got 3 already
     
  4. aleet

    aleet Newbie

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    Why don't let everyone see it? I bet people on your list will have something better to do than reviewing your sales page.
     
  5. SpellZ

    SpellZ Regular Member

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    Or... I can just wait until someone who I trust... posts.
     
  6. jimbot

    jimbot Registered Member

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    I'll take a look for you...