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please review my landing page ?

Discussion in 'CPA' started by richman, Feb 12, 2009.

  1. richman

    richman BANNED BANNED

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    if I use landing page , what is the best converted offer ?
    dating or cam ?

    BTW, thank you
     
  2. Darknoob

    Darknoob Newbie

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    Nice work, that far exceeds anything I am able to come up with based on my dismal html skills.
     
  3. fulleclipse

    fulleclipse Regular Member

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    Nice job on the landing page! I would suggest to go for cam as the site looks like it is cam oriented.
     
  4. Infinity

    Infinity Registered Member

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    A solid peace of work, congratulations! My advice would be to focus on cam, this would play better with the site's overall impression.
     
  5. SpellZ

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    richman, look at the top of your page it says "Untitled Document". You need to change to something different

    As far as design goes, it above-average

    The "Gina" girl on the left side.
    If you have a choise (and I don't knwo how this whole thing works, I mean just yesterday I found out what CPA stands for) I would change the .GIF file that you are using and put an actual 'LIVE CAM' there or something more realistic. That way you might get some people clicking there and get some $$$ because now it looks fake so everyone knows its not real, so there isn't a point on clicking there

    Other then that...

    I would move your entire TABLE is it? Or did you use a wrapper? (<Div>) in any case, I would move it about 10 - 20 pixeles down a little so it won't start RIGHT from the top, but have a little black space at the top.

    Just my 2 'Graphic-Design' Cents



    Edit: Are you making money from a site like this?
    Shit... I wanna make money like that LOL. Looks like an easy design
     
  6. gabixxx

    gabixxx Junior Member

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    Well .. there are a lot of pages like this one on the internet .... the design is pretty but ...

    You should tell them why they should sign up to .. whatever .. and why they should sign up right now .. some limited time offer maybe .. fake talking to a girl on the webcam only to find out that he can't type in until he's registered .. Some cutie in need of money for a boobs implant that is willing to show him pictures if he registers .. some girl that just moved in to "javascript" visitors town and needs some friends .. and what do you know .. has some naughty pictures but you need to be registered to see it ...

    The story always beats the graphics ..
     
  7. SpellZ

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    "The story always beats the graphics"
    Heh, never heard this before.

    But when I think about it... You are right.
    I can totally people using guilt as one of the main things