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PLease review my copywriting..

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by khabibf, Feb 11, 2010.

  1. khabibf

    khabibf Junior Member

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    Dear all BHWers.

    I need a little, or much advices on my first copywriting.

    Here is the original article.

    Usually people with a bad credit record find it difficult to get an auto loan. Most loan providers are reluctant to release a huge amount to people with poor credit rating. In addition, automobile loans for applicants with bad credit will have much higher interest rates compared to normal auto loan interest rates. This is due to the risk of repayment by people with bad credit is much higher.


    Nowadays, demand for the credit card and loan is on the rise. The money lenders start to opt for the credit scoring which is based on the mathematical algorithm. This algorithm is designed to assess the credit worthiness of applicant. This credit rating is much effective tool to measure the level of the risk to approve the loan application compared to previous criteria.


    If you have higher the credit rating, the more chances you will get the loan application successful. There are some factors like delay in payment, unpaid, etc will certainly deteriorate your credit ratings. There are major three agencies like Experian, Equifax and TransUnion which provide the credit ratings services for you. People with poor credit are still possible to repair their bad credit records. First of all he should take time to review his credit reports which he can get it from reporting agencies as mentioned above. He should examine whether there is any mistake in the credit report. He must check properly to find out any pending payment which is not reported earlier.


    If you want to apply for the automobile refinancing, you should select the suitable auto car loan at lower interest. The bad credit auto loan is beneficial to those who have poor credit ratings. Before applying for the loan, applicants should investigate whether the company offers the good interest rates or not. Online bad credit loan service is the best option to apply for your loan refinancing.


    Before signing the loan contract, people should go through the whole agreement to avoid any misunderstanding. Furthermore, to apply for the new auto car loan, he must estimate the value of the car also. There is minimum car value required by each loan lenders. The car value should be at least worth that specified value.


    Poor credit auto car loan is now reachable easily online. Many loan companies nowadays understand that more and more people do not have perfect credit ratings. Many people actually do not know this bad credit auto loan is actually very popular among car lenders nowadays.


    And Here is My Rewriting result.

    Most people with bad credit records would be very difficult to get a car loan. Why? Because most borrowers do not want to give loans to those who have bad credit. Moreover, loans to people with bad credit will cause high interest rates that borrowers must bear if it compare with the normal rates, especially on auto loan.

    Recently, credit card and loans demand increased quite sharply. Lenders will perform a validation based on a mathematical credit score formula. This formula is designed to measure the applicant's credit worthiness. This credit rating is a very effective tool to measure the risk of the loan.

    If your credit score high, then your chances will be more high. Some factors like late payments, an unpaid loans, and that sort of thing will deteriorate your credit level. To get your credit rating, you can use some of the services provided by major agencies.

    People with poor credit ratings could still get a loan by improve their credit ratings. What they have to do is take the time to review credit reports with companies that provide services. For example Experian, Equifax and TransUnion.

    If you want to use it to apply for a car loan, you are advised to choose a low interest loan. You should get information as possible about the matters relating to the value of such interest. You can search through the Internet, make it easier in comparing the company.

    Just Search it online, and you will get tons of information about bad credit auto loan.

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    It pass copyscape. And I do that for 15 minutes.

    If you have any suggest, please reply this thread.

    And, could I Sell my "skill"? ( or it just crap?)

    All suggests welcome.
    Thanks,
    Khabibf
     
  2. maxxtuner

    maxxtuner Junior Member

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    There are some grammar errors example:
    If you have higher the credit rating, the more chances you will get the loan application successful.

    First sentence third paragraph original article. Fix those first if you are using article rewrite software, or the errors will show in the rewritten copies.
     
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  3. khabibf

    khabibf Junior Member

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    Thanks. The original is from ezinearticle. I don't check it before. :)