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Please give me feedback on my Intro video and Squeeze page

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by DENNYBOY, Jul 29, 2012.

  1. DENNYBOY

    DENNYBOY Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Hey guys,

    Note: Before u check my squeeze page, I want to clarify one thing that I am NOT posting here to promote my website. I have posted this in Blackhate lounge section by following all rules. My squeeze page is not live ...so you can not submit your information anyway. Thanks for understanding & I will highly appreciate if you can provide feedback.

    Okay..

    I have been working hard to pre-launch my website. I am kinda confused to decide if i should have current squeeze page or squeeze page with sales video showing demo of my product.

    I have Intro video created at http://shiningwriters.com/Intro.swf. After you watch video you will be redirected to my squeeze page http://shiningwriters.com/reserve-your-spot/

    Do you think people will submit their info into current squeeze page OR should I create Sales video squeeze page which explain more information abt my website?

    Thanks

    PS: Please do not submit your information in squeeze page as you won't be able to see anything and it's not live
     
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  2. macdonjo3

    macdonjo3 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Are you trying to promote yourself or are you actually looking for feedback?

    The intro is kind of cheesy. The Santa Claus icon is pixelated and it looks like you used a template to build the designs. Something almost like you'd find on TemplateMonster.com but lower resolution.
     
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  3. DENNYBOY

    DENNYBOY Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Thanks for the feedback macdonjo3. I will try to change Santa with something later. However, I have to pay $5 again on fiverr to change Santa ..lol

    Also, I am not trying to promote otherwise I would not mention NOT to submit your information on my first post. I am not here to grab email addresses . it's very cheap to open BST thread here.