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Please Gimme Hardest Slap

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by iyalah, Jul 14, 2009.

  1. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    all master, can you all gimme the hardest critique on my new blog??? it already full setup in autoblog mode :p I use several tactic on this forum hehehe

    http://www.IMSpectrum.com

    thanks b4 to all bro
     
  2. Chapati

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    Editted didn't see it was an autoblog at first.
     
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    Heres a slap for yah. Take this lightly.

    I dont understand what the fuck im reading. Whats a hamlet? Im 4 lines in and im stumped :)

    Keep working on it though.
     
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    page error
     
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  5. hammad24

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    Alrite get ready for the hardest slap ever.
    First of all, nice theme but the artsy theme might not be the best for Internet Marketing related blog; try going for a more professional looking theme. There are lots in downloads.
    Secondly, its good that there is a lot of content on the site but you really have to improve the grammar. If you wrote this content yourself, I suggest you give it to someone to edit it or hire a freelancer to review all your articles. Don't get me wrong I can still read and understand most of it but there needs to be a flow to the writing.
    Lastly, I see a lot of writing and not enough pictures/videos. Adding these will increase the time people spend on your site.
    Thats all I have for now but if you improve on these points, Im sure your blog will be a hit.
    Good Luck
     
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  6. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    Thanks guys, I use article PLR then use to rewriter to make it more unique, I think I must do all write by myself :p, and put some video content there.

    and I will dig to more prof theme.

    I will work on it thanks all brothers
     
  7. Mjordan

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    Yeah I don't like the flowery theme man.
     
  8. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    I got change the theme and it already up :D, hope it will be pleased all of you guys, mayyybeee :p

    check it out: http://www.IMSpectrum.com

    And get me another slaps... I enjoy it hahahaha
     
  9. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    MJordan, flowery has been gone man.. What about now :D
     
  10. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    Hammad, I already change blog layout, hope tomorrow add up some video and audio, pictures to bro :)

    Thanks for your slaps :D I will update progress. Thanks bro...
     
  11. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    Jod, I already emailing my hosting, they said they had some maintenance on it so the host do not stable :p
     
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    I still dont really like it. Even though the color combination seems to be better. I still feel the website jumps onto the users face. It isnt easy to read nor is it user friendly.

    I think the blog should be more compact. It should be easily viewable on different resolutions.
     
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  13. trapmuzik

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    screw the theme.. i cant even follow the content.. what rewriter did you use for this so I can be sure NOT to use it. The main point of this besides not appearing to be an autoblog is to provide useful and readable content so that the visitor wants to stay and read. I was done in the first two sentences. If google ever decides to visit your blog they will know for sure this is an autoblog. Either that or they will think its some really bad english.
     
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    That is true though. The content isnt all that good either,

    I never really did bother to comment on the content till now because, i never did want to read it. The website wasnt soothing nor user friendly. It wasnt easy to navigate and i really didnt understand what its about :/

    Improve your sites theme and also improve the content!
     
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  15. iyalah

    iyalah Regular Member

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    WOOOW I LOVEEE you guys a lot of input THAAANKKSSS
     
  16. iyalah

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    Bro, do you have suggestions for theme??? I am stuck :confused:

    I use PLR articles and rewrite it using software called, I think to outsource it in my next move :p. need some money first hahahaha
     
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  17. iyalah

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    Screw me Trap hahahaha, I came from non engglish language bro hehehe, I use PLR articles and rewrite it with software. I will change my strategies then. Do you have any suggestions theme??? I already browse to find theme and didn't came up with good one :confused:
     
  18. bigspade

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    Go to skinpress.com, lots of nice themes that I used for my autoblogs...
     
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    Big thanks Spade, I will check it now :D
     
  20. shadowfax

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    I agree with others that the content has to be good, Right now it isn't! Work hard on getting some good content and visitors will start following you. I like the theme though... Just one more thing, in the list of tabs, there is a tab called "One more tab", remove that please, it doesn't look professional...


    Regards,
     
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