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[OPINION] article for my niche

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by luwww, Nov 28, 2014.

  1. luwww

    luwww Registered Member

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    Hello,

    I'm interested about your opinion about this: http://justpaste.it/i6u7 article, I found a writer at a pretty good price, but I am not sure if this is good enough for a niche site.

    Thank you!
     
  2. Trepanated

    Trepanated Supreme Member

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    It reads OK, although to me it feels more like a list of facts than an engaging article.

    That may be because the writer had a word-count to stick to though (and there are a lot of facts that need to be included).

    I also noticed the writer did not start with a description of what the condition was - and for this article, I feel that is important - it would have also made the article feel more complete.

    There are a couple of minor grammatical errors that could indicate English is not the writer's first language, but could also be sloppy writing - nothing terrible though.

    Spelling and punctuation are pretty good and he made decent use of sub-headings, which breaks the article up nicely and makes it more readable.

    On the whole it's OK.
     
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