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One Of My Ex-Friend's AWESOME Article

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  1. coreygeer

    coreygeer BANNED BANNED

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    You're going to love it, I would easily pay $10 per 100 words for this article!

    A little background: My friend is a journalism major and always puts people down talking about how awesome he is.. hence why the title now says ex-friend. Well, I wanted to see some of his "awesome" writing skill. According to him, "I don't get out of bed for less than $25/hour", so he no longer writes. Let me know what you think of this AWESOME article I found. It's supposed to addressing Toyota buyers and why they should purchase them.

    Would you be happy if you paid $10 per 100 words for this? Knowing the guy and seeing his work honestly made my day.
     
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    My eyes are bleeding.
     
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  4. coreygeer

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    Sorry bro, it's completely serious.

    I also found his Ezinearticles link which makes me wonder if Ezines back in 2008 ever reviewed articles before allowing them to go live.
     
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    So is he no longer your friend because he's a dumbfuck? Or is he also an ass?
     
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    did you really pay $10 for this???? shit I could have made good money when I was writing $2.5 per 450 word articles @ the imtalk pips....
     
  7. coreygeer

    coreygeer BANNED BANNED

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    Oh he an array of problems. He also lies every time he opens his mouth, but a little bit of both being a complete asshole and one of the dumbest people on the planet (that I personally know).

    I was joking, I wouldn't even print this out to wipe my ass with it if I ran out of toilet paper.
     
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    Wouldn't even use it on a 4th tier Web 2.0! lol

    You should wait till this thread gets a few replies, then send him the link :D May help bring him back down to planet earth

    But seriously, there's no way this is true/real! You said he is a journalism major? There is no way on earth that someone with a degree in Journalism would write like that, making stupid spelling mistakes
     
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    Excellent. OP, I urge you to do this!
     
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    Yep, he sure does. Bachelor's in Journalism. Don't worry, all of his Ezines are just as bad.

    I just might.
     
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    GM thought the article was being used to diss the TC 2012 hence they gave it 10 out 10 for bad spelling
    - antiwiplash seat fature
    - noice reduction
    - the preasent
    and more too many to check all

    I read the article which by the way - Was it compiled as a Joke!
     
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    LOL! too funny!
     
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    Lmao, well you would be wasting ink if you did print it out so... :p
     
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    There is a punctuation mistake in the very first sentence.

    In my opinion, this article could have been written by a good non native writer, but it wouldn't pass in any English class within the U.S, and that's my criteria for what distinguishes "good" writing from "fill my website with content to rank higher" writing.
     
  15. coreygeer

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    If I didn't know who he was, I would think this was a Non-Native writer.