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New Sales Page - Mafia Wars Cheater - Looking for Reviews

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by pjmc84, Aug 19, 2009.

  1. pjmc84

    pjmc84 BANNED BANNED

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    Hey Blackhatter family,

    I've just released my 5th Clickbank product entitled 'Mafia Wars Cheater', it's a new cheat guide for the hugely popular Facebook based game 'Mafia Wars' (over 5 million gamers currently).

    Looking for some honest feedback on my sales page, as it's currently awaiting approval from Clickbank.

    Sales page is up at: http://www.mafiawarscheater.com

    Again, I'm always looking for HONEST feedback regardless of whether its positive or negative.

    Cheers!

    -pjmc
     
  2. oldenstylehats

    oldenstylehats Elite Member Premium Member

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    I think a video of some high level accounts would be really cool, but as it is it looks like a pretty good generic sales page to me.
     
  3. xplicit

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    Yea looks good, Like olden suggested, Maybe some vids or screenshots so the visitor can see what they get.

    Just took a look, Dont forget those meta tags on Sales Pages too. Big G likes them.
     
  4. senso851

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    Yep some videos would be great.
    Also a 1$ Trial would be great to get customers..
    You can offer them just some info for that 1$ and for full price give me all you got.
     
  5. cucr3

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    I just saw the DP post about Dom*inate Ma*fia War*s and it is supposed to be selling pretty good..

    I would say video(s) and some fake or real testimonies.
     
  6. Gibbzee

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    Id be interested in promoting it when it gets on clickbank, ive got some mafia groups. The page looks good but as others have said, it could do with some screenshots of the results of you methods.
     
  7. wowhaxor

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    It looks good to me. I would say more media though - whether images or, as recommended, screenshots. People like to visualize things.
     
  8. killahbee

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    Looks good to me, too. Damn might even do some promotion of that myself. Don't like Clickbank though. Hope you are selling it for a lot :)
     
  9. BadArticle

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    background download slow, you can remove the white part in the middle to cut the file size a little bit
     
  10. catapult copy

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    Could tryry doing headline in impact all dark red with one exception off mafai wars cheat guide. Seem it is a graphic, do a slight drop shadow.

    "hush hush" may be better like this..

    Headline needs to stand out instead of blend in and draw the reader in. Your header has black red white, headline red/black subhead black/red. Try have one wordor group in each a different color instead of multiple. My testing over years shows too much does decrease conv. The old saying clean neat and tidy. Looking crisp.

    Add video as nearly aways gives around about 30% boost...pull margins in by 15px, gives more whitespace at left and right edges

    Good solid salesletter with good use of bullets
     
  11. pjmc84

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    Thanks to all you guys for your genuine advice and criticism..

    I will definitely try to throw some video/images pertaining to mafia wars stats on the sales page very shortly.

    FYI.. Clcikbank is just about to approve this product, so for those interested in promoting.. sit tight and I'll post a new thread once it's ready.
     
  12. ifwearner

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    I'd drop the price point by $20 b/c a lot of the people playing are younger with less money, and it would mean more sales for you.
     
  13. dev88

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    i will try to sell it
     
  14. contentRus

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    Uhmm this is some great shit .

    Add a video , show a high level account with big money.

    I'lll sell it on facebook ppc easily .
     
  15. dublecee

    dublecee Newbie

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    I'm getting a lot of hops with this and have already sold a few. :D Thanks a lot.
     
  16. pjmc84

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    Just a note to keep in mind, with this product you'll get insanely cheap clicks on the content network *hint hint* ;)

    I won't get into further details than that.. but you get the idea

    Good luck promoting and congrats on getting some sales! Hopefully this is just a taste of things to come.. cheers