Need suggestions to make site better


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Oct 13, 2008
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i was hoping if i could get any suggestions on how to make my first money online

so this is what i did i downloaded a PLR product dealing with fat loss got a squeeze page site up one of those buy this ebook sites that we all see around the internet i priced the book for $20 got some longtail keywords though using MNF using exact phrase counts from about 1000-3000 searches a month bought a new domain an lastly i purchased some xrumer services now most of my keywords OCI counts in MNF were from 38% to 61% an all of them didnt have much comp. so i wanted to know what is the likely hood that i will be able to make a sell just by doin this like i said this is just a test for me to see if i could actually make any money online but i do know that i need traffic which means i need links i also was thinking of purchasing scrapebox services

any suggestion, i can these small squeeze sites work

any information is welcome bad or good