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Need Squeeze Page Critic

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by domzz, Jul 15, 2012.

  1. domzz

    domzz Junior Member

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    These are my FIRST squeeze pages, I need a critic on them before I start full-out advertising them.

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    buildwealthsecrets.com
    getxbacknow.com
    
     
  2. JimmyWong

    JimmyWong Registered Member

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    The owner of that video is going to be pissed you stole it. Site is bland: 4/10. Very standard across the board.
     
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  3. steelballs

    steelballs BANNED BANNED

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    The squeeze page buttons are not your copyright I know who owns them so be very careful
    on what you put out there!
     
  4. supapera

    supapera Regular Member

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    great job buddy
     
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  5. Irukichan

    Irukichan Registered Member

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    On the relationship site:

    Grammar fail, It should be "There is no impossible situation/There is never an impossible situation/There is no situation that is impossible/somethingotherthanthat"

    It seems like you went out of your way to make a very stereotypical, unbranded, bland website. Building an image for your product, a brand that people can trust, is one of the best things you can do to improve conversions so take that as you will.

    also

    People care enough to copyright those buttons? That's kind've sad
     
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