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Need someone to review my aff landing page

Discussion in 'Affiliate Programs' started by proxyweb07, Jan 4, 2009.

  1. proxyweb07

    proxyweb07 Newbie

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    I would appreciate if someone that is knowledgeable about affiliate landing pages would review the site I just made.
    Took me 4 hours (I know, total noob) to create a website with a few pages.
    PM me for the URL.

    THANK YOU in advance!
     
  2. AffGuy08

    AffGuy08 BANNED BANNED

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    PM me the URL and I will check it out for ya.
     
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  3. AffGuy08

    AffGuy08 BANNED BANNED

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    My review :

    Ok firstly you got a very good domain to promote diet offers and there are plenty of them out there that you can use to make some cash from.

    On the website, it is too simple and the layout doesn't look good. Make the "Latest Testimonial" part on the left with smaller fonts and rearrange the words to make it into 2 paragraphs.

    The picture on the right looks good. Add more diet related articles (buy a few unique articles here on bhw or get them rewritten from an original article from ezine). The information provided is too less and there is nothing much for your visitors to read and appreciate your website.

    Sort out all the links at the bottom of your website and rearrange them accordingly. Lastly and most important thing is to add affiliate banners (diet offers) to make some $$ from the website. There are many trial offers out there that you can choose to promote, they will just charge your visitors a small fee of $3.95 for shipping.

    Hope this helps out... :)
     
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  4. proxyweb07

    proxyweb07 Newbie

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    Thank you AffGuy08 for your review!
    I will definitely be implementing your suggestions as soon as possible.
    Thanks again. I love BHW!
     
  5. justthinking

    justthinking BANNED BANNED

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    I sent you a PM review of your site. I mentioned some of the same things as affguy08 did above.
     
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  6. proxyweb07

    proxyweb07 Newbie

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    Thank you for the honest review justthinking! Will implement your advice also. I can't believe I didn't do this sooner (signed up for BHW in Feb08!)