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Need Some People to Review the Feel and Look of my Website

Discussion in 'White Hat SEO' started by richforeign, Nov 10, 2015.

  1. richforeign

    richforeign Newbie

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    I have worked real hard and my website has changed a lot compared to the way it looked before. But I need people to look over my website and give me a honest review of what you guys think needs improving and what is actually good and should stay. I payed someone to review my site from Fiverr and that didn't go so well.

    My website is a online store for graphic t-shirts.

    Also, if their are any threads in here about getting traffic or SEO for online stores. I have been working on SEO and I just feel like I'm not accomplished with SEO at all as I don't see the traffic no matter how much services I pay for. So any advice and tips would be much appreciated.

    Thanks :)

    website is richforeign and you know the rest. I'm new so I cant post direct links

    ( I am in no way promoting my website I just need some advice on the look and feel of it. I also hope this thread is in the right directory sections OP.)
     
  2. syafs

    syafs Registered Member

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    I used to hire a couple of 'models' from Fiverr, asked them to take some street pose shots, wearing a blank shirt. Then I overlay the design on them. It's good for brand building, add identity to your clothing line when you can't afford real model.

    Good luck with your site OP
     
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  3. richforeign

    richforeign Newbie

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    Thank You for the information.
     
  4. blackpayman733

    blackpayman733 BANNED BANNED

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    hi send me the link of your site.
     
  5. LoftPower

    LoftPower Elite Member

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    Wow what a great idea. I think that this can be easily done, and is much cheaper then hiring a model. Great thinking.
     
  6. richforeign

    richforeign Newbie

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    its my username and just add a period then a letter C then a O then a M (sorry I have to go through all of this just because I haven't been a member long enough.
     
  7. Sherbert Hoover

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    My thoughts:

    Remove this from the home page: "Rich Foreign is the best online shop for cool graphic t shirts for men and women. Our online brand carries trend pop culture and inspirational designs. Looking for Winter Designer men Hoodies, t shirt dresses, or graphic t shirts with funny phrases and bold art? We have many tops and tees available. Rich Foreign is totally updated with new designs every week."

    Center New, Featured, and Top Rated products section or stretch across the page width.

    Get rid of that silly pop up when I first visit your site. Nobody likes that. I get the point of it, but if you are trying to be an authority, that's not the best way to start.

    Remove the footer widgets. Especially the About Us and the Product Tags. The About Us is just spammy words with no meaning. The tags are meaningless and stretch the footer far beyond what it needs to be.

    Why do you have the raw domain and then this? http://www.richforeign.com/homepage/ On that page, the second and third slides are defaulted. I'd suggest removing that page entirely, and removing the link in the very top nav bar.

    Zoom out on the Google Map on your contact page, and make the map and contact form side-by-side. Make the contact headers for each box inline vs outside the box.

    Take that Instagram stuff out of the About Us page. It's irrelevant and messy, along with that dumb looking tiger graphic.

    Remove the spam comments from your first blog post, and hire someone to write some relevant, top-notch content.

    Other than that or some deeper code searching, looks good. Somewhere I might consider buying from if I wore stuff like that.

    -UM
     
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