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Need English Native Speakers to Spell Proof my Front page

Discussion in 'Hire a Freelancer' started by teguh123, Jun 23, 2009.

  1. teguh123

    teguh123 BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    http://genepoolsurvivalguide.com

    $10? Indians? Grammar fix too. Easy job.

    Also need resellers for the e-book, to eBay, etc. Resellers can keep 100% of the first 10 and make 75% of the sale for the rest for now.
     
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  2. yowies

    yowies Regular Member

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    err...the topic/topics...??
    "Gene Pool Survival Guide with How to Learn Math e-Book for Maximum Saving"
    Probably has a target audience of about 3 worldwide...:)
    You will have to tighten up up the whole idea let alone have someone check the english..
    And a proper sales page..
    best of luck
     
  3. spcldeal

    spcldeal Registered Member

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    Okay, the grammar is awful...but worse are your starting statements. I think you will turn people off when you talk about so and so getting slaughtered or raped when your subject matter is really about how to get laid...I think...you got a bunch of stuff about capitalism, disparity of success, and abundance...kinda confusing. Anyway, you need a total rewrite of the first page.
     
  4. link2swim06

    link2swim06 Registered Member

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    I can make it sound better, let me take a look at it.
     
  5. jclipzmedia

    jclipzmedia Newbie

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    LOL well I enjoyed reading the sales letter epic.