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Need Copywriting Suggestion for an offline product

Discussion in 'Copywriting & Sales Persuasion' started by opiates, Nov 28, 2012.

  1. opiates

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    Hi ,

    I am sales manager at an offline Health products manufacturing company , just thought we will like to get our Diabetes product online for sale..

    But i'm worried about the copywriting part ,I mean any examples or sites that you can recommend for best conversion of visitors to sales ?I mean the design ,or layouts - I can get the content part .

    For example , this is also an offline product http://www.drnumb.com/ , I'm planning to make our sales page for the diabetes product like the sales page at this link...I mean the design/Layout..will that be ok for good conversion ? or any other better suggestions ?Just the layout , or multipages is good ?

    Any advice or suggestions is really appreciated .

    Thank you guys..
     
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    Ah..yes..Ofcourse with that page i want to attain more sales :)

    And yeah , noted your point ..Thank you !
     
  5. Jenny30

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    Nice question and i guess the answer is pretty effective. i mean the link shared.
     
  6. 4kbmcc

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    Not knowing exactly what you are trying to sell makes answering this difficult, but in general I would agree that copy is your #1 element. You need to be considered an authority site to have the panache needed to generate significant sales. Especially if you are selling a new or alternative medical treatment.
     
  7. johnj

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    I disagree. Design is just as important as copy. Alot of offline DR marketers just rely on good copy, but on the Internet you need good design. A good design builds trust. Good copy builds trust and persuades. You need both to hit a homerun.
     
  8. johnj

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    sorry bit more. I've had copy on an "ugly" site and copy on a well designed site and saw a 300% increase. Design was the only change. copy remained the same. The page you show is not bad though.
     
  9. JOBGG

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    That may be true johnj, but then I've seen atrociously sales lettery sites with legendary copy, and they still get me itchy to buy whatevers advertised there. He should worry about some meticulously crafted copy and then about the design. Make a small, clean design and put the copy in. Do some split testing. Find some good copywriters to review your copy, and implement the changes (this will cost you a little bit more), or if you can't manage to write the copy yourself, hire somebody.