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NEED Affiliates- Erik Creed's Underground Bad Boy Dating Blueprint

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  1. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    Hi all,

    The site and product just got approved by clickbank 20 minutes ago!
    The site is at:
    http://www.AttractWomenTonight.com/

    Looking for some affiliates to make money promoting this.

    What you get:
    - Great copy and graphics to sell the product.
    - Make 75%
    - Earn Bonus payouts!

    For more information please check the affiliates section here:
    http://www.AttractWomenTonight.com/affiliates

    Ok, if you got any questions you're welcome to PM me here or send an email using the contact form here:
    http://www.AttractWomenTonight.com/contact

    Thanks and Have A Great Day!
     
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  3. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    Yeah LOL, nah that thread was more out of boredom. :D
    Been in this niche since 2002 so that thread was for fun only.
     
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    Nice sales page mate! I'll probably try it out
     
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  5. Mjordan

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    Umm the site is down?
     
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  6. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    It's up at my end but contacting my host now just to be sure... Ok spoke to host, seems nothing is wrong and it loads fine... But they went ahead and refreshed the server to increase loading time.
     
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  7. Mjordan

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    Ok it's working for me now, but loading really slow. It threw a 404 when I first tried to look at it though.
     
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  8. Erik Creed

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    I think it might be all the videos it's fetching from youtube that's loading slow.

    I accessed the website using my mobile device yesterday and it loaded pretty fast except for the videos.
     
  9. Mjordan

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    Ok some constructive criticism...

    Offer page looks very good man. The only thing I don't like is the very first testimonial video with the big guy in it. It's WAY to fake. All the others sound pretty legit though.

    Remember don't just set it and forget it, be sure to split test the offer page since this is brand new. Different call to action buttons, different headlines, different colors, etc... The hours you put into split testing will pay for their self times 100 I guarantee.

    I might give this a shot once I get some spare time.
     
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  10. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    about 30 hours after requesting it
     
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    I agree with the first video. That guy is acting like he is backstage at a Jerry Springer show.

    Is that blond dude giving the thumbs up you?
     
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  12. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    Thanks, I actually thought of that.
    I'll get a new video to replace the first one, what makes it look so fake, is it th way he looks towards the right to read every now and then?

    I should have anew video up within 3 days to replace the 1st video.

    My comnpetitors don't even come close to what my sales page looks like. The sales copy is proven to work I've used it in the past to make sales on a site I no longer own.

    Thanks again for the improvement advice, I feel this is almost perfect... Almost :rolleyes:
     
  13. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    I wonder, he does look like me :rolleyes:
    Ok that video is gone give me up to 3 days to get the new one up :jester:

    If you guys want I can simply remove that first video for now and replace it with one of the others below it.
     
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    @OP, you said you've been in this niche since 2002. just wondering, is dating a good niche? sorry if this off-topic.
     
  15. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    Yeah dating is a good niche, but the bad news is that it's VERY competitive these days. In the past you could work alittle and see results, but now you need to really work hard on the marketing aspect of things.
    Articles
    SEO
    Backlinks

    Just about everything has to be almost perfect and you need to keep at it to see some real results.
     
  16. Mr Ex

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    First of all, good luck with your product. I have some suggestions that will help you increase your conversion rates. Let me tell you this right off the bat, my intention is not bashing your offer page just because i write sales copies. My purpose of this post is to point out whats wrong with it and what can be done to make it better. I suggest you read the whole post thoroughly to get the best out of it. Here we go...

    Dump that copy. You heard me right. Dump it and rewrite it from scratch. It needs editing yes but that's not the main problem. Your story is not something that people will buy easily. The whole mentality behind the story is just wrong. It just doesnt make sense. Let me tell you what's wrong with it.

    1) Why would you claim yourself as an intelligent person who is in decent shape? You don't want to do that. You just lost the empathy with most of your visitors right off the bat. This entire pua industry is after guys who have "average IQ" and are "chubby" not an athletic gym monkey. Because in general, those are the people who are having self esteem issues. Do you think that an intelligent person who is in decent shape would have a hard time meeting with chicks? Buy every ebook after countless hours of reading on the internet? Hell no.

    2) What is that relationship thing?? People are horny dude and they can't get laid. They need pusssy, not a relationship.They stay at the bar till the close and they leave empty handed. Yes, one night stand IS a big problem for them no matter how long they sit at that bar, contrary to your sales copy. That is why they are reading your sales page instead of screwing a bar chick.

    3) So you grabbed a pen and paper, headed to a bar, met with a chick named Sandra and she gave you the secrets of art to dating. She even helped you build a website. Come on man, who would buy that? Any intelligent person who is in decent shape would not, believe me. And you lost the average iq chumps right off the bat anyway.

    A sales copy requires some sort of credibility and hypes it all up with a believable, well flowing story. Sandra in your case wont do the job. She is not a guru. She is just a random bar chick, that's all. What you did was an interview. However, people are NOT interested in interviews. They buy BLUEPRINTS. They are after the big secret that will change their entire lives forever. And that Sandra does not have that credibility.

    4) Your titles are killing the conversions because you are not using them effectively. Titles are the secret part of a sales copy. They are your secret weapon that entices the readers with hidden benefits. They make your visitors keep reading to the end.

    Let's look at your titles: "Hanging out", "meanwhile back at the ranch", "research begins" these are wrong and outright boring. They just sound like parts from a 4$ no name paperback romance novel. Fix your titles ASAP. That's not the way of using them effectively.

    5) Where is your bulletin features and benefits? People are idiots. You have to repeat what they will be getting and how your product will help them if they go ahead and buy it. You should use a bulletin list so they can clearly see what the whole deal is about. You cant just expect everybody to read it from the beginning to the end. You use that bulletin so that people who skim through your sales page can still understand what the deal is about!

    6) And i saved the most important part for the last. WHERE ARE YOUR BONUSES?? You can't expect high conversion rates without some bonuses.

    Anyway, there are more things that i could point out but these are mainly the most important reasons of why your sales copy needs improvement. Dating niche is a tough one. I wish you the best. Any questions, feel free to post here or you can pm me as well...
     
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  17. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    To Mr EX...

    I agree partly with what you just said, I couldn't agree more about having bonuses. I actually have bonuses ready just have had trouble finding a good graphics guy to make a big bonus graphic with all the bonus covers in it. But allready have someone working on that now.

    As for the sales letter, I actually like it the way it is. The sales letter does convert as well since I've had it up in the past.

    Most sales letters in this niche are boring but this sales letter actually has a story to tell.

    I don't want a sales letter that tells the readers the 1,000 things they'll get.
    I want it to be a story, people love a story...

    As for getting laid, this isn't it I'm working on something else that focuses on getting laid only, it should be ready before Christmas.

    Ok... Thanks for the feedback. :cool:
     
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  18. Mjordan

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    I 100% agree with Mr Ex. If you don't implement any of what he said, at least change your titles and have a bulleted list.
    But why not just split test it if your current page really does convert already. Just make a completely new page following Mr Ex's guidelines and run it side by side to see which one you get better conversions out of. (you can still use your videos, just a different ad copy). Sure you would rather tell a story, but why would you really care how your ad copy is if it's optimized and making you money.
     
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  19. Erik Creed

    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    Many can talk the talk but only a few can walk the walk...
     
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    Erik Creed BANNED BANNED Premium Member

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    TO MR EX =

    I agree my copy is GREAT so I see no reason in changing it...

    I started this thread to look for affiliates, because I currently have THE BEST COPY in this niche.

    I've been in this niche since 2002 I've had over 5 professionals write great copies for me and this copy is a thousand times better than all the copies I've had in the past.

    So why should I change it now?

    Point made...

    If anyone in this thread tells me he or she can write better copy SHOW ME PROOF
     
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