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Need a native english speaking member to write a sentence. Will give +rep

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by stallion45d, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. stallion45d

    stallion45d Regular Member

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    Hi everyone. I ordered on fiverr a few "unique articles" to promote a clickbank Internet Marketing product. My english sucks, so I´m not sure if the grammar of some phrases is the proper one. Could you correct this?:

    "Internet is like a constant big river of money you could ever imagine till you are onto it"

    Also you could write this you way as another option. I guess they used a shitty spinner on already written articles.

    I will give thanks a reputation on this thread to the member/s who helps me.

    Thank you in advance
     
  2. Duffers5000

    Duffers5000 Elite Member

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    On the Internet money flows like water and you will be swimming in it.

    That's a rough translation of a pretty cheesy line
     
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  3. stallion45d

    stallion45d Regular Member

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    I like that one. Thanks and rep given to you , mate.

    Any other suggestion? (Probably I will need more than one spinning as I have a few articles)
     
  4. StarkContrast

    StarkContrast Regular Member

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    Think of the internet is one huge river of cash flow, though it's hard to imagine until you've been in it for some time.
     
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    Here's a few to consider - I've made them headlines, they should all be relevant to an article about making money on the internet:
    Find out how to tap into the 21st Century Goldmine... the internet
    There's only 1 way to make money 24/7 - here's how to plug into internet riches
    Discover how to gain financial freedom from the world's largest money making opportunity
    Are you benefiting from the largest wealth transforming opportunity ever, the internet?
    The internet - the world's biggest financial opportunity - discover how to get your share
    Hope they help you!
     
  6. Amsterdammer

    Amsterdammer Power Member

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    "Internet is like a constant big river of money you could ever imagine till you are onto it"

    The internet is like a fast flowing river of money, streaming faster than you can imagine.

    Keep your rep. :)

    EDIT: Just for the heck of it:

    Picture the internet as a fast flowing river of money.
    Internet flows on money, money is streaming through it faster then you can imagine.
    The internet river is filled with money streaming faster than you can imagine.
    Before you ride the money river named The Internet you can't imagine how much money flows through it.

    Not all of them are 100% ok btw. But, I had fun anyways. :D
     
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  7. thejake

    thejake Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    LOL

    The Internet is like a constant, giant river of money you could never imagine until you're on something.
     
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    1337rout Registered Member

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    The internet is like a constant flowing river of money, you never know how fast it'll flow until you're paddling up-creek with no paddle. .....[instert WSO] will be that oh so, much needed paddle to get you safely through these white water rapids.


    A rough translation with a little more pursasuive marketing put into it.
     
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    silentthunder Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Well said, I always find myself earning more when I fuck bitches or at least one. Must be something about
    the friction, the Divine Spark and the all around feel good. :cool: