Native English Speaker Help Needed

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  1. vaidavytas

    vaidavytas Power Member

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    I know it's not a language type forum, but I hate those so decided to ask fellow members here. Is this grammatically correct? it goes above featured product (single product shop)..

    Enjoy Special May Sale
    and get even 35% OFF!

     
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    nope, not correct.

    pro tip: use grammarly extension to check your content for mistakes.

    I would have somethig simple, like,


    "This May, Enjoy Our Special 35% Discount"

    Hurry, limited discount. First come, first serve.

    but then again am not native speaker either or a copywriter for that matter.
     
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    vaidavytas Power Member

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    Thanks man! Yeah, your version sounds way better to me! Can any native speaker tell if this @satyawrat version is good to go?

    "This May, Enjoy Our Special 35% Discount.

    Hurry, limited discount. First come, first serve."