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My poem I wrote.. Never trust people online unless your certain

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by MiLiTARYiV, Sep 30, 2010.

  1. MiLiTARYiV

    MiLiTARYiV Senior Member

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  2. wrangler

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    I think you mean UNLESS YOU'RE CERTAIN... TOHER should be OTHER... line 4 YOUR should be YOU and you can lose the redundant AND... line 5 another YOUR / YOU'RE... line 6 WHERE should be WERE. That's paragraph 1, I don't think I can face 2-13, sorry.