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My first CPA landing Page, what now?

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by Reposal024, May 25, 2017.

  1. Reposal024

    Reposal024 BANNED BANNED

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    Hello,

    I have just finished my first CPA landing page.
    I am planning to giveaway free fidget spinners :)

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    added as a file (zoomed out a little bit so you can see the full page)

    So,
    I do not have many experience and I am kinda new to this but does the page look ok? Do I need to change something or can I just start promotion it now.

    Thanks
     

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  2. BlackCat0.0

    BlackCat0.0 Power Member

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    Further not "furthur" (4th line "HOW DOES IT WORK")

    Other than that the lp is ok.
     
  3. SqueakyToy

    SqueakyToy Registered Member

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    you have type-os. QUICK survey / PROVE you are human / send you AN e-mail.
     
  4. jezhead

    jezhead Registered Member

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    major spelling errors, besides that it's fine
     
  5. Billy_Batts

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    Lol what the fuck is up with these spinners on bhw.
     
  6. Chemg

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    Not that I have a lot of experience here but besides the typos. Looks ok. Instead of "Click to enter the figet spinner giveaway with button next to it", I would just make that whole space the yellow (sorry if that isn't the color, I'm colorblind) button that says "Click to enter the Giveaway". I feel like it draws your eyes to it more. Just my two cents and i could be completely wrong.
     
  7. SEO

    SEO Jr. VIP Jr. VIP

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    40% Chance of Winning
    This Giveaway is Available
    How does it work?
    Complete a quick survey to prove you are a human.
    We will send you an email with further
    end on the 5th of June
    I did not receive an email
    If you did not receive

    I think that covers most/all of it.

    I want to tag all of the people who want to sell these things and be like "BAM! Proof the fad is nearing its end." When your product is used as a loss leader for CPAs and email acquisition, it is saturated. LOL.
     
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  8. escobart

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    Nice. Where the traffic will come from? Facebook ads?
     
  9. hero76

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    Yes how are you generating traffic? Instagram?? Fb?? Twitter??
     
  10. DulalKisku

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    Capture.PNG

    Just CHANGE the CHANGE
     
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  11. BMarvelous

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    Well I can notice that leadpages landing page and I haven't used that in over 2 years. But yea you definitely need to proofread for spelling. The guy with the 40% chance of winning idea is nice as well.

    Edit: I meant to say your 40% idea was nice not the other guys whoops.
     
  12. dawniey

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    I wouldn't put the "40% chance of winning" completly useless
    it will discourage people