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My best friend's song

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by aspe_heat, Jun 8, 2013.

  1. aspe_heat

    aspe_heat Power Member

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    A few weeks ago, I posted my friend's song on here so you can check it out and leave your opinion. However, he recorded it again and produced it, he also added the third verse.

    Video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxNk4OYxSKk

    Please check it out and leave your opinion either here or on the video, it means a lot to both of us.
    Thanks a lot! :)
     
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    killer beat, I like that it aint the regular verse-chorus-verse
     
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    Black teens should not be rappers

    throw a curve ball and do rock or something.
     
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    This guy is white though :D
     
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    tell him to stop what he is doing then and get a real job.
     
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    The beat is nice...
     
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    Well, thanks :D
     
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    It's nice that everyone's being supportive and all... but that was really bad.
     
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    I didn't ask anyone to be supportive, I just asked you all to share your opinions, so thank you for sharing your own :)
    We all have different tastes, so it's fine. Thanks for checking it out!
     
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    Okay, I can't help but leave a comment here. :)

    First of all, I love the beat. The instrumental is awesome. It's perfect for the mood of the song. Great job on that.

    Second, Lyrics are good. I know he exerted lots of effort in writing the lyrics so that's good.

    Lastly, the delivery... Well, it's not the best delivery. There are a few parts of the song where you can really see that he struggled a bit at spitting the words. I also didn't like how the song ended, when he repeated the MIC , in the sea part... Kinda took away from what he established. But hey, this is really good.

    I liked it.. Immortal Technique is one of my favorite emcees of all time, and this song is somehow along that mold. He still got work to do, but this is a good start. Tell your friend to keep it up, he's good! Heh. I'm a rapper myself so I know what this feedback will mean to him, hehe. We love it when we get honest feed from our works! :)
     
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    Hahaha, I told him people will compare him to Immortal Technique, it was a joke, but turns out it was right! :D
    Immortal Technique is dope!

    And thank you very much for the feedback you left, I'll let him know about it!
    I appreciate that you spent your time listening to it and writing a detailed feedback. :)
     
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    I loved the lyrics! The background music was also really fitting. Good job by your friend.
     
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    Thank you, I appreciate it!