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LOL it took me ten hours to design this simple page

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by black20, Feb 25, 2014.

  1. black20

    black20 Registered Member

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    I am soooo glad i just finished my first affiliate site.It took me Ten hours.Just 1 page..Heee:p
    What do you think of my site?
    Good
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    http://numberoneseoservices.com/
     
  2. oscilay

    oscilay Regular Member

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    To me the background looks bad and unprofessional.
     
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  3. Sharp25

    Sharp25 BANNED BANNED

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    The page looks great, just need another logo..cooltext no good...
    you can use something like Logo Design Studio Pr, and design better ones..
    here is a link to the software

    Torrent File
    http://www.mediafire.com/download/rfub922owvvtntm/Summitsoft.Logo.Design.Studio.Pro.Vector.Edition.v1.5.0.EN.FR.DVD-SoSISO.torrent
     
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  4. Reyone

    Reyone Elite Member

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    1- No information whatsoever about the services you promote

    2- Homepage only

    3- Social links take you nowhere

    If your aim is just to get clicks from people shift the items to the upper fold.

    Design is fine, so as long as you are planning to rtb/ppc it then it should go alright.
     
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  5. beastien

    beastien Registered Member

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    I agree with the second post, your background is a little distracting, but other than that I like your site. :)
     
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  6. Tosmekop

    Tosmekop Supreme Member

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    The mobile version looks good, but I hate mobile versions of sites. You should make it togglable.
     
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  7. Masterptc

    Masterptc Regular Member

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    Not a fan of sliders, and agree with others change the background and logo should be white and pink to match your design.
     
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  8. PrinceVisi

    PrinceVisi Elite Member

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    To me it looks like a skateboard fan page with those colors.

    You need 10 more hours to fix it and find a better color combination.
     
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  9. Asif WILSON Khan

    Asif WILSON Khan Executive VIP Premium Member

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    OP are you using a nulled theme?

    At least change the address and telephone number.
    When I searched them, it linked to lots of Church websites and this theme:
    http://churchthemes.com/
     
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  10. lucasbraydon

    lucasbraydon Supreme Member

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    If it is one of those church themes then it seems like OP has ruined it with his customization and color choices.

    OP I would rather buy SEO off fiverr than a site that looks like yours :D
     
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    Lalalaenhund Power Member

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    The site loads really slowly.
     
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  12. evilclown

    evilclown Senior Member

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    OP if it took you 10 hours to get it like, IMHO you should hire someone. Your message is not clear, its overloaded with offers, is too busy. Don't you hate when you enter a site and can't find or understand their layout. What's the first thing that you do? Leave. That's what people are gonna do, enter and go.
     
  13. pompano

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    Yeah, I would hire someone. I mean you are using a themeforest theme. It took you 10 hours to make the images and set this up?

    I am not far off and I used the color selection on themeforest! :p

    [​IMG]
     
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  14. black20

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    Oopss!!:pThanks anyway
     
  15. muscleteen

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    Hey :)

    I like your enthusiasm! Congratulations on taking action, and yes, you should be glad :)

    I'm going to give you a few suggestions. I'll start with only 1 for now cause I need to rush to a class. I'll post again with more later.

    Your site looks good overall! I like it. I personally don't have a problem with your background, but I think I can understand why some people do. It has some "splash-like" effects on it and maybe it doesn't really look professional to some.

    Think of it like the difference between:

    This:
    [​IMG]

    And a more proper shirt like:
    [​IMG]

    Some people would take a guy wearing a Ralph Lauren shirt more seriously than the other guy. People judge based on looks. Yep!

    Will write more later.

    P.S. Not sure why some people are being harsh and are not just offering valuable suggestions. The forum has changed. Anyway, ttyl.
     
  16. johnny6667

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    1. change that logo design it looks unprofessional and sloppy check out fiverr for decent logo designs, well said @muscleteen

    2. Theme design. your site does no justice it looks cheap and I would leave IMO, look into a flat responsive theme or a review theme would be my personal take.

    3. Add content in relation to what you are offering, there is nothing stating otherwise in regards to the purpose of your site.

    4. I see you are promoting SEOclerks vendors, I think it would help to do reviews on each of the services you are promoting.

    5. Most importantly I find people convert much better if visitors see that you are an actual person, putting up an about me page with a picture can earn a visitors trust.

    6. No Content, I would recommend writing posts about SEO tip and tricks/practices/techniques which are insightful and informative to your readers there by promoting the services through your posts.

    That just a few things i would do
     
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    It's really slow loading, try and do something about that. Also the header isn't very appealing. The layout is good but you just need to change a few things around so it looks more professional.
     
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