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Just Finished my 1st Squeeze Page-What do You Think?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by agag2, Nov 19, 2010.

  1. agag2

    agag2 Supreme Member

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    Hi

    This is my 1s squeeze page pls let me know what u think about it

    h**p://twittercashsecrets.c*m/

    I'm looking for ways to improve it-Need your suggestions

    Thanx Guys
     
  2. mudbutt

    mudbutt Jr. Executive VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Thats a sales page..not a squeeze page. I wouldnt buy from it, it looks scammy. Too much txt, no visuals, headline not captivating, colors hurt my eyes. Sorry, but theres lots of work to be done.
     
  3. liquid5170

    liquid5170 Junior Member

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    hahaha nice avatar f*cker :thefinger
     
  4. liquid5170

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    i agree with mudbutt.. plus whats with you advertising scrapebox links but your site isn't even indexed? maybe it's better this way so that you can improve your site more.

    however, i will give you props on actually taking action... keep it up, you're better than 90% of the newbies now!
     
  5. dillfly2000

    dillfly2000 Junior Member

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    Needs images, maybe a custom twit bird, and some cartoon cash.
     
  6. agag2

    agag2 Supreme Member

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    Didnt blast the site w SB yet that's why it's not indexed I could easily get it indexed in less than an hr!
     
  7. mudbutt

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    Who cares if that site is indexed? Not like its going to rank for any terms worth competing for. OP: you should make a optin page then sell through your list. Its alot easier.