I've always wanted to take a shot at creating a novel, however I've never really had the time to do it... however here recently the amount of free-time I have on my hands is increasing constantly and I finally decided to sit down and come up with a plot. I'm planning on creating this as a three book series, with each book around 150-300 pages and selling it on kindle for $2.99 (You know, why not... I might even make it free) Anyway, here is the "Prologue" that I just wrote, I would like you guys to comment on it and let me know of anything you see that I need to/could improve. If you think the story may be interesting or if you would want to read more of this to see where it goes. The goal is to pull someone in with the first page, and that's what I'm hoping to do while only giving some of the background. Anyway, here we go. Let the hate begin, lol.