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Is this Article up to Par?

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by CityTech, Mar 21, 2012.

  1. CityTech

    CityTech Registered Member

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    Hello, I know this method is no secret, so I won't hide anything here.

    I followed a guide.. Well, 3 quarters of one, to make money on Squidoo.

    So I put together an article on how to find the right PC that fits your needs.

    Even reading the rest of the guide, I still don't know if this article is up to par.

    I have put together a ShareCash link that is advertised on the bottom by the way. I have 35 tags. All of which are the top searches I found with the Google Keyword tool. In my Squidoo biography, I also advertise a ShareCash link. I have a rank of 316,226, and right now it's currently my only Lense.

    The Link:

    Squidoo dot com slash findapc

    (Sorry, can't post links.)

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    Thank you a lot, I'm a real noob at all of this, and am just learning. You guys here at BlackHatWorld has been so helpful. You guys taught me so much and I didn't have to spend a dime, in fact, I gained money thanks to your generosity. Thank you.
     
  2. CityTech

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    Bump. Anyone?
     
  3. CityTech

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    Bump again. Please, a simple good or bad will do me good.
     
  4. michalemorski88

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    Never follow any guide, just read it, read it and make your brain work, then use it in your way, got it?
     
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  5. CityTech

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    Yes I understand, but what I need an opinion on is if I set up the monetization and SEO parts correctly.
     
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    It's pretty good, maybe too colloquial at times and seemingly unprofessional with the ...... everywhere but yeah all in all not bad. Make some more :) Its worth looking into how you can design borders and things for your lens to make them stand out. Out of interest which guide are you following? A WSO?
     
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  7. michalemorski88

    michalemorski88 BANNED BANNED

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    You are GOD you need ppl to work for you, hire someone for 5$ and he will do it! become an investor, talk to ppl, get their trust, thats most important thing you should care about, not about SEO (- just numbers)
     
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  8. CityTech

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    Thanks for your response. One question, what does GOD stand for?
     
  9. CityTech

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    Thanks for your response. I am going to stick with the current article, because it was meant to be a semi-humor casual thing, bu thanks for the feedback. I found the guide here, the link is... What.. For some reason, I can't find it, sorry, but only read up to paragraph 3 or 4, by the way.
     
  10. michalemorski88

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    You see more - you know more, get outside seo > get outside articles > get outside advertising > get out of this, get a point, go up, become a god and see everything, let your eyes see more, let your brain work more,

    STOP FOR A SECOND! Stop working, get a point

    ZEITGEIST - MOVING FORWARD


    google it google EVERYTHING you want to know,
    do some research ON YOUR OWN
    let your personality think and finally

    YOU WILL BECOME EVERTHING YOU WILL BECOME YOURSELF YOU WILL BECOME GOD

    do some research in this forum for My success story. 500k/month

    most important thing > dont watch the numbers, dont watch the profit

    just BE YOURSELF
     
  11. CityTech

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    Thanks man, I agree completely, well except for the part where you become your own god, but other than that, we're on the same page.