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Is this article readable? Hope u give me a percentage of the readability quality.

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by loveghost003, Aug 24, 2013.

  1. loveghost003

    loveghost003 Regular Member

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    A short time ago, I wanted to use my hand at sketching a portrait regarding my son by copying his photo. Naturally, I possibly could never expect him to sit down still very long, nor could I sketch fast adequate to read everything. I chose a pleasant close-up photo of his face and begun to draw. I would not have with just about all this delightful project an additional thought without some help. I figured out the way to draw a sensible pencil drawing and i also want to reveal some tips together with you.

    I did some research online and found a lot of tutorials. I found you can find out essentials of drawing at no cost on many sites. Nevertheless the free tutorials I came across online were restricted in what they can teach me. To varying degrees, it absolutely was all very mechanical. I desired more.

    In terms of drawing a person face, for example, there are a few basics such as determining the design. Can it be oval, round, square or coronary heart shaped? Next, think the face split up into 4 quadrants. If you wish to, draw a faint line throughout the center vertically and after that one horizontally. This will allow you to get the dimensions right.

    Today, this is where the majority of people make a mistake: the eyes. As opposed to what most folk may think, the eyes must be placed on in between, horizontal line. There are several basic eyes shapes that may guide you for the most sensible portrayal: oval, rounded, slanted, slit. And then, you can put nose directly in the eyes, about half-way down from your middle horizontal line, making an fictional the other way up triangle involving the eyes and nose.

    Spot a quick, straight horizontal line beneath the nose, half way down, for that mouth. Atart exercising . the ears, making the the surface of the ear line up with all the eyes. You can also get basic ways of outlining a nose and also a mouth, whether or not smiling with lips exposed or closed. Keep your outer edges of the mouth using the center in the eyes. Practical pencil drawing takes training and it also needs a good teacher.

    Good courses provides you with how to increase detail for the eyes and mouth. Shading and ways to add texture and messing around with light and darkness really brings a family portrait to our lives. Show patience. Remember, it may need some practice to have it right.
     
  2. Sgt Kraut

    Sgt Kraut Regular Member

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    I (as a non-native speaker) can understand it. The style of writing just seems a bit weird to me. Hope that helps!
     
  3. Duffers5000

    Duffers5000 Elite Member

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    Yeah, Its readable pal but not without a struggle. I would happily place this on a tier 2 web 2.0 but nowhere near anything I wanted a human to visit. What you have dragged out into several hundred words would probably be three lines in normal speak.

    You asked for an honest opinion...thats it. If you wrote this yourself you have good English skills just not full readable fluency.
     
  4. rock124

    rock124 Newbie

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    Read the first three sentences. No, this is not readable.

    Edit: Well, it's somewhat readable but there are some mistakes which put me off when reading it.
     
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