Don't use plenty of different colors and font sizes on your intro. Don't use a BIG image in general, especially not with lots of fonts. No comic characters. No reduced price tags, especially for a brand new product. Let someone proof read your thread if you are not a native English speaking person. (I'm not too but that doesn't matter because you want to sell something). Please no more 'HannahMontana Superduper Megarofl 1st Position Guarantee SEO-Packages' No copy/pasting reviews or screenshots of reviews at all . . . others may want to continue the list FYI: Those threads get closed immediately without even reading (at least by me) because all I see is SCAM written all over it. It might not be scam but it looks like a crap landing page for a useless ebook or GetRichQuick-sheme and targeting idiots that are impressed by bullshit.