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I need someone to take a look at my site, please

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by Jomasdf, Aug 6, 2012.

  1. Jomasdf

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    Hello, I have just started with IM and I have no experience what so ever. I just got done with makeing my very first website (yay!) and I would appreciate if someone could take a look at it and see if thing are all right. :)


    Thanks alot!

    xcv.riddarna.nu (its not in english)
     
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  2. wasted

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    It's tough to give advice with no website lol
     
  3. Jomasdf

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    Yeah well, I didnt know if I was alowed to post it lol.
     
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    sure tell me the url
     
  5. First Edition

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    What's the website?
     
  6. mario279

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    i think i took a look at it. I would suggest you use a different template bro, you can find tons on torrent or rapidshare. Your site is ok, but it needs more of a professional look to it. no offense but it looks kinda spammy. good job though at first attempt. i would give better feed back but i dont know what the site is about.
     
  7. mario279

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    wait a second, i just translated the whole thing with google translate.... is that true? is that a medieval festival thats gonna go on?
     
  8. Jomasdf

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    Yep, its a thing in my country. Maby I should have explained a bit more.

    This is not a serious atempt at bringing in som money. I just wanted to see if I could rank ok with a keyword. The keyword is "knight" in english and it had about 20k local searches with low comp.

    I guess I should look around for a better theme then. Thanks alot for that one :)

    The link is now in topic.
     
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    Um, I guess it should work. It does for me atleast. It might be because I just installed a new theme (thesis).
     
  11. Nines

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    Whats the url?
     
  12. Jomasdf

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    Its in the first post, but here it is again xcv.riddarna.nu
     
  13. cjratnagiri

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    Just change the xcv to www and it will work ;)

    Anyway the site looks just fine. You need to add a eye catching theme to it and you are good to go
     
  14. Jomasdf

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    I just changed it to the thesis theme, I think it looks pretty good now :D. Now I just need it to get indexed, something thats seems so far away.
     
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    If it was in eligh, i would have helped it bro. Also, your template is not very good, just change the template first, and also the site is loading slow.
     
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    The site does not seem to work, I clicked through a couple of times but no joy - is it down - will try again later... x
     
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    It does work, but it's slow as hell lol, link is http://www.riddarna.nu/

    In my opinion, web design is too basic, i doubt that anyone would buy anything from page like that, you will need to make better design, or at last find some template and implement in on your existing web site.
     
  18. Jomasdf

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    Hm, no idea why its slow for you guys but that is a problem I guess. I thought that the thesis theme seemed pretty nice but its to basic you say ? Any recomendations? :)

    Thank you for all the tips, its gold for newbies like me!
     
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    yes, pretty basic. move your adsense stuff to the left side of the page...that is where people's eyes tend to go first. you need to have a more professional look...go to the downloads section here and get a nice wordpress template, or better yet, purchase one.
     
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    Just go and search on warez for wp templates ;), you will find 1000's of awesome looking templates.