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Hows my CB lp look?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by yamahafzr, Dec 5, 2009.

  1. yamahafzr

    yamahafzr Regular Member Premium Member

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    Hey guys I am making a Clickbank product and the pitch page was just completed. Let me know what you think. Teenagersplan.c0m is the url
     
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    yamahafzr Regular Member Premium Member

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    anyone?
     
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    It looks great only testimonial videos are sideways for me, not sure if it's on purpose or whatever.
     
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    Well, one thing teenagers don't go to sleep at 10PM!

    Na, but it really, it does look nice, the first video wasn't bad either... Testimonial was... eh a little weird, might try to pay a few people online to make you a few videos for cheap.

    Although, I did notice there was a HUGE block of text with lots of paragraphs, now... I love my paragraphs too, look at all my sentences so far... But when it comes to making a site/lander I'd cut down for space sake and it keeps people from being overwhelmed at how much they're about to read. But honestly I think if you put in a graphic somewhere in between all the main text (maybe banner sized, has money on it and it's pretty) it should break up the block of text.
     
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    yamahafzr Regular Member Premium Member

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    Thanks for the input. Wheres a good place to have testimonial videos recorded? And i know its sideways. The player is flipping it because of the dimensions. Still trying for a solution to that
     
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