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how to get more conversions for ebook... copy of my sales page.

Discussion in 'CPA' started by sammyg1043, Jul 20, 2015.

  1. sammyg1043

    sammyg1043 Newbie

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    I wrote an ebook on how to get laid on tinder with about 60 pages of comprehensive content and must say I'm rather confident in my book. But I wrote this book specifically to content lock it and am having trouble converting it on my website. I recently made the website and have written 5 articles (dating advice) for it but have not done any seo for it and have been doing the seo jacking method. I have gotten over 150 clicks (bitly) and no conversions and that is more than enough to realize that the offer is not converting well. Here is a copy of my sales page. I would highly appreciate any advice as to what I could do to convert better. This is my first sales page ever and I think I did all right but I know I can do better.



    WOULD YOU LIKE TO FUCK A NEW GIRL EVERY WEEK
    Tinder is the world's most infamous hook up app and hundreds if not thousands of women in your area are signed up and down to fuck right now. The truth is that over 90% of men on tinder are all being rejected while the few that know how to attract women through this app take advantage of all the free pussy.
    "Get laid on tinder tonight" will show you how to take advantage of all the secret loopholes and powerful techniques that will get a women from tinder into bed the same night. And if you act now, you can get a promotional copy COMPLETELY FREE that includes 2 other products that will elevate your game to a whole new level. http://xmlgrab.com/317350
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    I KNOW WHAT YOU'RE THINKING
    "But I'm not good looking enough. Only guys getting laid on tinder are the good looking dudes. Even when they match me, they barely respond and it doesn't get anywhere."
    Have you ever given it thought that it IS IMPOSSIBLE for the very few handsome players that don't need tinder to begin with, to be banging the hundreds of girls in search for a hook up? No, it isn't. This leaves us with the majority of guys getting laid on tinder are AVERAGE LOOKING GUYS. They don't need to rely on good looks because they attract women far more effectively through other methods.
    Attraction is a feeling a woman does not choose to feel and those tinder players know how to take pictures that automatically captures women's' interest and know exactly what to say to get them to them in bed. Anyone can do what they do.
    The even greater news is that almost 99% of guys aren't doing any of the things these players are doing so you will NATURALLY stand out in the crowd of millions of men being rejected once I show you ALL the INSIDER tricks and tips.

    I AM ONE OF THOSE AVERAGE LOOKING PLAYERS

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    Yep that's me(if you're wondering, Don Wilson is my pen name). And being that I'm Asian, women would never give me the time of day on tinder...likely because they think I have a small penis. But luckily I never let that put me down and spent months learning how to attract women on tinder.
    After months of trial and error, I learned what works and what doesn't and in the process, I developed a system that would work 80% of the time for me. I have slept with 27 women since I have developed this system and now I NEED to share it to the world. There are too many guys on tinder who aren't taking advantage of this wonderful app and I think everyone should. I definitely am. Just got another number 46 minutes ago
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    WHAT YOU WILL LEARN

    • How to hack your brain and become naturally attractive within days
    • Simple trick that allows you to effortlessly flirt and always have something smooth to say
    • Photo hack that will capture any woman's attention and increase your number of matches
    • Daring openers that are direct and get things sexual right away
    • How to always have something exciting to say and build sexual tension immediately
    • How to get her number within the first 3 messages
    • Time tested method that just about guarantees she goes home with you the same night
    • And much more

    ULTIMATE PICK UP ARTIST BLUEPRINT
    Not only is "Getting laid on tinder tonight" the most comprehensive guide to getting laid on tinder but you will also get the ultimate pick-up artist blueprint that contains ALL the best routines, best lines and best tips from all the TOP pick up artists in the world. Over a thousand pages of material and all of it isorganized perfectly. Here's a sneak peek. That is only page 626.

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    You will have unlimited material to work with on women and can never again come up with the excuse "I don't know what to say to women." You wouldn't even need the pua blueprint because in "Get Laid On Tinder Tonight," I already take you through every single aspect of tinder game from the profile, to exactly what to say to girls and even to how to guarantee sex on the first date. I do everything for you but put a condom on your dick!
    DO YOU FEEL YOU ARE NOT CONFIDENT ENOUGH?
    MATTER OF FACT, you couldn't even say "I'm not confident enough to talk to women" because I even include a powerful subliminal audio and an exclusive technique that will imprint a confident attitude into your subconscious mind within DAYS.

    ACT NOW
    Part of our promotional sale for only the NEXT 24 HOURS, you can grab "Get Laid On Tinder Tonight," the Ultimate PUA Blueprint and a Powerful Subliminal Audio FOR FREE if you complete this http://xmlgrab.com/317350 from our sponsors OR you can get all three for only a small price of $3 if you buy from this https://payhip.com/b/SXFl
    Take advantage NOW. Tomorrow, the price will go back to $25.
     
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  2. sammyg1043

    sammyg1043 Newbie

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    I'm sorry about the terrible format. The text did not convert well. How do I get rid of the highlighted colors?
     
  3. HoneyHelper

    HoneyHelper Supreme Member

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    I think, your site id good. You should do some SMO to get highly targeted traffic ;)
     
  4. randybishop

    randybishop Elite Member

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