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How do my rap songs sound ?

Discussion in 'BlackHat Lounge' started by chrisis4ever, Jul 16, 2017.

  1. chrisis4ever

    chrisis4ever Regular Member

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    This one is only 46 seconds



    Here is a full song : I wrote this beat and recorded my own vocals.

     
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    I like the first one, and btw your timing is pretty good. Do you have more songs?
     
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    Do you want my honest opinion?
     
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    It's alright but not as good as this.

     
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    Not bad. Little bit high pitched for me, I think you should make it a bit deeper and darker tone.
     
  8. chrisis4ever

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