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How Do I make Sales With This Site

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by charliefromthachi, Jul 19, 2008.

  1. charliefromthachi

    charliefromthachi Registered Member

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    I just set up the sales page for this site but I have no marketing in place for it

    I'm thinking I may have gone over board with the bold text.

    I think the offer is good enough and the price is right but I only have a

    theoretical knowledge about how to drive traffic and get sales. I want to make a crap load of sales, I'm scared off ppc and I dont have enough money to "experiment"

    Are there any black hat methods I can use to make a bunch sales real quick?

    the site is hxxp://w3.7oth0usandayear.com


    This is a produc that I have resale rights for
     
  2. charliefromthachi

    charliefromthachi Registered Member

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    I good deal of the copy is my own doing . . . whaddyathink? . .. Good?
     
  3. chachinga

    chachinga Guest

    LOL! that's funny.. this is an old ebay auction. I bought it from that guy josh.. I guess his ebay biz went down the tubes after the digital dl crap
     
  4. chachinga

    chachinga Guest

    First off, you have no h1 tag that accurately describes your page, your title tag sucks, and you have no affiliate program to back you up. You could probably publish this on clickbank to get a boost if the affiliates pay attention, but you need to seo your page a lot better.
     
  5. BozoClown

    BozoClown Junior Member

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    I am not a copy writer and have never done it. But here is my opinion.

    You need to re-write it. I wasn't motivated to read it beyond the first two lines.

    Make the reviews standout and have some diversity. They are all basically two lines. The names are so uniform. You probably hate the format of most sales pages which have so many highlights, colors and font sizes. But those sites sale. I don't like those formats too either.

    Don't start with your personal story. The reader wants to know how you are going to help them make money, and you need to catch their attention by providing that then lead them into your personal story.

    You could start off with a shocking statistic or figure. When you get into your personal story, don't make it sound like a success story for you. Readers don't identify themselves with plain success stories, these make them say to themselves "I wish I were as successful as that guy". You need to sell them hope, so they say "I am going to be as successful as this guy".

    Any paragraph longer than four lines should be a testimonial.

    You also need to be very forceful. For example

    changes to
    1. Put the reader in a mindset that they have already bought the product. Don't let them sleep out of it. The first sentence does that, it also mentions your success and builds anticipation.

    2. The second sentence enforces the 'i own it' mindset while giving out the message of continuity / longevity.

    If you use forceful language (e.g. Instead of "I want to share" you say "I am going to share", ....) the reader becomes more receptive. At the end of it they will follow your suggestion that they should buy the product. Afterall, they read through everything with a mindset that they already owned the product.
     
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  6. TheInternetHustler

    TheInternetHustler Regular Member

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    I cant help you promote it, but I do recommend getting some custom graphics
     
  7. CrabWalker

    CrabWalker Newbie

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    How do you instill trust - you have testimonies but is that enough?

    The web design is poor.

    I am always weary of these quick fix sales make a million for nothing type stories and this comes across quite strongly on the one pager. Perhaps personal preference.

    Copy is ok.

    [FONT=&quot]All the best! [/FONT][FONT=&quot][/FONT]
     
  8. chachinga

    chachinga Guest

    well the product that this guy is selling does hold some merit, but it is old news.. basically create 10 domains a day based on some popular niche, write about 10 articles for each niche and throw some adsense in. Do that day in and day out, and maybe G will give you some love.

    Then there is the option to just flip the domain after the adsense is producing.

    It's like a 10 ebook package. The seller on ebay who sold this was a powerseller selling this stuff. People did buy, but i remember his auctions being much flashier than the webpage.