1.) I think it needs color, All of your text is black and nothing stands out for fast skimming.
2.) You need an act now catch. Like only 100 copies left at this price then it will increase to blah blah.
3.) You say people are making millions every year yet all of your "proof" are small amounts like a few thousand in a few weeks.. Thats not a million a year. Right there would make me leave. Just the title make millions would make me leave lol. Cause thats bs unless you work your ass off. People dont want to work that hard. I would make it something more believable.
I didnt read the whole thing but I like how you have a video which I didnt watch lol and some pics.
Just make sure that you obtain a decent conversion rate BEFORE you go out and get affiliates. Or else they will be gone as soon as they realize their traffic is being wasted.
The better the conversion rate, the better the affiliates.
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