Hey guys give me some ideas about our new business site :)

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  1. blackpayman733

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    Hey guys give me some ideas about our new business site :) it's finished now and launched to the business :)

    site - http://www.toplinkbuilding.org/

    Thanks
     
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    Looks good!
     
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    Below are my notes from reviewing the site. My comments are more visual and not SEO related (since that's not what I am good at).

    If this is helpful, consider providing some back links for me.

    The P in Penguin is capitalized but not the P in panda. Be consistent.
    Remove "Just" and start with "Use"
    Change line to "Take 2 minutes to refer our services." This page takes you to the Services page. Create an affiliate module instead or remove.
    Put a space between clients.Such
    The Vimeo video did not load
    The Blog column in the footer isn't aligned
    Your Twitter button does not go to your page
    Add a photo within the About Us text. Break it up.
    Blog page is empty. Do not launch site with half-finished pages.
    The Contact image is old-school and doesn't match the style of the page. Replace it.
    The Contact > Find Us buttons do not work
    There are several places that do not have spaces between the period and new sentence.
    Serp-Bomb page says "BOOS Your". Should that save Boost?
    On page above, replace build to building "By build High Quality backlinks"

    Others will most likely find something else..
     
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  4. GustavNovak

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    Looking really great. The only problem I see is that the central part is still linking to some lorem ipsum bullsh1t, but I guess you are working on it. :)
     
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    Oho yes.thanks for show that mistake.wanna edit it :)
     
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    You did a brilliant work.Thanks for showing mistakes :)