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  1. SOCIALSEOGUY

    SOCIALSEOGUY Registered Member

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    I just wrote an article

    "Top 5 most romantic California Getaways

    In the United States there are countless beautiful and romantic places to choose from. Of course, some of them far surpass the others. We therefore selected for you exceptional places in California to go on excursion with your sweet half with eyes closed.

    Vineyard of the Napa Valley, California

    Indulge your senses in the Napa Valley. Bring a blanket, stop at the Oakville grocery store or the Soda Canyon Store for sandwiches, fresh bread, local meats and cheeses. You just have to choose one of the numerous vineyards such as the Peju, the Pine Ridge, the Rutherford Hill or the Clos du Val for a picnic in the heart of the vineyards. Whatever your choice, you can first taste one of their many grape varieties, choose a bottle and then walk around hand in hand until you find the perfect place to settle near Vines.

    Pfeiffer beach, California

    Pfeiffer Beach One of the most beautiful sunsets on the American West Coast is Pfeiffer Beach, a small crescent shaped beach known mostly by locals. What makes the beauty of the place is that it still seems wild ... It is lined with huge rocks and the waves rage. It will offer you an unforgettable view of the sea and you will live moments of pure emotion with the loved one.

    Post Ranch Inn, California

    Post Ranch InnSanctuary is the most commonly used word to describe this legendary boutique hotel, located on spectacular cliffs overlooking the Pacific at Big Sur. Its unique architecture is classified as ecological as it adapts squarely to the environment. We wanted to preserve the site by building walls around old trees and installing floors on stilts to protect the soil. Everything has been built with recovered materials like wood, glass and the hotel is in perfect cohesion with nature. Not only do the 40 rooms offer mountain or ocean views, they all have a king-size bed, a fireplace, an indoor or outdoor hot tub and A private terrace. The perfect place for a unique getaway!

    Torrey Pines, California

    Torrey Pines is located north of San Diego. Torrey Pines is above all a large beach nestled at the foot of the cliffs (and therefore rather quiet because it is hard to reach) but also a high park with nice views of the ocean for a few short walks. It is the ideal place to take his bowl of nature without going too far from San Diego and enjoy the typical scenery of California!

    Santa Cruz, California

    Steamer Lane is one of the most famous surfing rental in Santa Cruz and California. This is where tourists, as locals will land to enjoy the show. When the sea is in shape, the waves are beautiful and large, and the pros are out. At this location, the coast is twisted, access to water not obvious. Two choices: a steep staircase leading to a rocky beach, or jumping into the water at the end of the advance. The latter gives a charming charm to this place. The silhouette of the surfers is perfectly drawn on the sky. And at sunset, it's even more impressive.

    Which of these places inspire you most for a getaway?"

    Help me to find any error from this.

    Thanks :p
     
  2. Lunaaa

    Lunaaa Elite Member

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    Pay me :) time is money
     
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  3. thaqu

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    hey guys I need 100 articles written and also a complete website and a list of low comp keywords plz some1 make it for me...
    OP get a fucking grip...
     
  4. elavmunretea

    elavmunretea Elite Member

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    Why would you upload your niche herebwhen anyone can easily see what site you post the content on and steal your whole niche?
     
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    blogzandstuff Elite Member

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    You could put it in here and click spell and it'll highlight problems. It's free
    https://wordcounter.net/
     
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  6. mechleader

    mechleader Junior Member

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    Ill go till I'm bored, I won't do grammar, just readability.:
    In the United States there are countless beautiful and romantic places to choose from. Of course, some of them far surpass the others. We have selected the most exceptional places in California to go on an couple's excursion that will be sure to surprise your sweetie.

    Whatever your choice, you can first taste one of their many grape varieties,
    You can sample taste each selection before you choose one of their many grape varieties

    One of the most beautiful sunsets on the American West Coast is
    at Pfeiffer Beach
    ...
    It is lined with huge rocks and
    crashing waves. It will offer you an unforgettable view of the sea and you share beautiful moments of pure emotion with your loved one.

    Ok I'm bored. On the house
     
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  7. SOCIALSEOGUY

    SOCIALSEOGUY Registered Member

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    Oh really :O I didn't know that.
     
  8. neilbhabuta

    neilbhabuta Elite Member

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    You probably shouldn't have posted that here if you are gonna use it on your site.
     
  9. elavmunretea

    elavmunretea Elite Member

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    Yep. There are various free/ paid tools that scan content to see if it's been copied from anywhere, linking people to anywhere it has been, meaning that if I put your content into the tool (I honestly have to reason to) I could find wherever it has been posted on the web.
     
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  10. SOCIALSEOGUY

    SOCIALSEOGUY Registered Member

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    Very useful info. Thanks a ton.
    Btw that was for my client who was looking for article for her california blog. I failed at interview.
     
  11. Mubashar786

    Mubashar786 BANNED BANNED

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    i use grammarly tried hemingway but it was a crap grammarly and copyscape combined you are ready :D