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  1. kotosolis

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    How fiverr accept my manage post ??!!
    because they declined all my posts !!
     
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    It appears that English isn't your first language. It might be good to work with someone who knows English more fluently to write out your gigs.
     
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    i'm arabic
     
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    That's fine. Do you know anyone who is fluent in both Arabic and English? That would make it a lot easier for you to tell them what you want to offer, then write up the Gig for you in English. I imagine this would help you get your Gig approved.
     
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    i mean that i posted a lot of gigs in fiverr but they declined my gigs
    i don't know wath's is the reason
     
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    I know what you're saying. Your gigs were probably declined because the quality of your writing in English isn't very good. That's why I suggest you to work with someone more fluent who can help write the Gig for you.
     
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    it is google translate good ?
     
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    I've never translated from Arabic to English, but feel free to write a long sentence in Arabic, translate it to English, paste it in here and I'll tell you how good it is.
     
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    ok, look one of my gigs
    -i will help you to realizing your dream
    -give me 5$ & i will teach how you play good football games (normal mode or career mode)
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    I can write sports reports or summary interviews in less than a day in French, English or Arabic

     
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    It's OK, but missing some things. Firstly, that is a very short description. I'm not sure what Fiverr's requirements are, but they may want more information than that. I have seen short descriptions get through, but I could understand what was being sold.

    In short, what are you selling? Are you trying to teach people how to play sport video games?
     
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    no this not description

    , yes i want to teach people playing good football games
    & realizing dreams of other people

    me to i'm feeling to realizz my dream
     
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    So are you trying to teach football video games, or football in real life?
     
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    both together
     
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    So... that might be confusing to most people. Generally, a person will either be interested in learning the video game or learning how to play the sport itself. It seems like those 2 things should be separate gigs.
     
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    but i can also teach person to realizing his dream
     
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    And that sounds very nice, but it also doesn't explain a lot. I think you should sit down with someone who knows English really well, outline the gigs you want to offer, then write them out. I think you're trying to put too many ideas into 1 gig. Each gig should be very focused. The description should also explain very specifically what your customer should expect for their $5.00. I hope this makes sense. I'll let others provide some feedback as well, but I hope I've helped you in some way.
     
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    you can write a good description for my gigs
     
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    The reason why fiverr declines ur gig is not always about the description, but there are some blank bar u need to fill, get the three steps done and never skip the requirements.