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First Landing Review Page

Discussion in 'CPA' started by lordsebzyy, Jun 30, 2011.

  1. lordsebzyy

    lordsebzyy Junior Member

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    Hellow!
    I've made my first landing review page.

    What do you think ?
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    http://acaiberrydietpills.info
    Please tell me if I have to change something or not :).

    Thanks!
     
  2. anic21

    anic21 Junior Member

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    page is not loading for me...
     
  3. eochoa8

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    It loads for me.

    Very nice job with the landing page. Are you using Wordpress?
     
  4. eochoa8

    eochoa8 Junior Member

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    Also, which CPA network are you using for the acai offer?
     
  5. moneyneeded

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    make an edit on your "reasons to buy" under #2 make a space between and lively.

    under #3 take off the , by It and also put a space between stomach diseases

    under the last one stomath should be spelled stomach

    Make "Take Into consideration" bigger and take off "other reasons to buy" and say Try acai berry today because...and then list the reason

    Those are my suggestions, I wish you the best buddy.
     
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  6. drogon

    drogon Elite Member Premium Member

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    Not sure what 'Order Acai' has to do with the CPA offer?
     
  7. bornformoney

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    I thought FTC has gone after acai...guess not lol...

    Improve the page with flashy graphics...check out some "guru" websites on clickbank and you'll get what I mean...

    put more hot slim images...

    I'd give it a 6.5/10 rating

    also look into jquery effects
     
  8. Kickflip

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    Its probably geo-targeted and only shows an Acai offer to certain users.

    I love it. I don't really think you should add in anything else for now.

    Run it for 1 month and see if you make any money from it.

    Its simple and gets to the point, and doesn't allow the visitors to get lost or bored from your site. I approve.
     
  9. akash64782

    akash64782 Registered Member

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    Nice job man! but Try to make it more attractive.
     
  10. lordsebzyy

    lordsebzyy Junior Member

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    Thanks all for the suggestions !
    This offer is from CPA saw from our user amcfad2
     
  11. lordsebzyy

    lordsebzyy Junior Member

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    That page is a redirect to my cpa offer but is only for USA people .
    I can't see it too :D
     
  12. drogon

    drogon Elite Member Premium Member

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    Ha ok thanks. Im in Thailand so wy i got confused seeing an unrelated offer.
     
  13. lordsebzyy

    lordsebzyy Junior Member

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    Now.... I think I have a problem.
    A big one !
    Where should I find traffic ? I need USA people only and my paypal have only 20$ .
    A good way to bring traffic to my website?
     
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