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hawke

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Nov 14, 2008

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• Jul 27, 2011

• #1

Let me know what you think

 

JackSparrow

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Mar 24, 2007

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• #2

That doesn't look too bad, at least you have taken action and created something. The real test is on clickthroughs and conversions, so may need to keep on tweaking till everything is earning smoothly.

 

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cherryberry

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Jul 12, 2011

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• Jul 27, 2011

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To be honest, only the color combination is good but the font selection and the effects are not good. More detailing work is required.

 

hawke

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• #4

cherryberry said:

To be honest, only the color combination is good but the font selection and the effects are not good. More detailing work is required.

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Suggestions?

 

JackSparrow

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I personally think the fonts look fine. i would put the live cam at the top of the profile not the bottom.

 

hawke

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I was trying to make it something a "Girl" would create.....lol guess I don't think like a girl to good

But I agree on the cam placement, I'll move that...

 

hgear

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Looks very girl...mission accomplished!