http://fs2.directupload.net/images/150726/qae6r5qi.png So this is actually my very first serious attempt in Photoshop to design something that should convert. It's not much, but still I want to ask you, whether you think this can compete with the original " http://thevenusfactor.com " landing page or not. My intention is to design something that looks a bit more professional than those common clickbank video sales pages. And yes , those random texts and pictures are of course not optimized and 99% random. It's just about the layout and not about the copywriting, video and all that stuff. Tell me what you would improve. Give me feedback. Do you think the layout is better than the original one? Thank you!