FEEDBACK WANTED! WOULD YOU USE THIS ARTICLE ON A MONEYSITE?

Hi all, I would really like your feedback about this article I have attached to this thread. I wrote the article but Iam not using it, so anyone is free to use it for whatever reason. (SEO niche)

Please read the article and tell me if you think it is good enough for moneysite or at least tier 1?

I will reveal why I want your feedback after a few reviews....

It’s reasonable quality. I don’t think I’d put it on a money site but I would put it on a hobby site, or a tier 1 site for sure.

Also, thread moved.

Personally I wouldn't use it for a moneysite. Although it would be fine for tier 1.

The content is good, and generally the spelling/grammar is decent enough. However, there's something missing with the flow.

Also, some of the sentences run on for too long. For example, "Write articles or blog posts that contain keywords that your website visitors might type into Google to find what they are seeking"

There are also awkward sentences such as this one, "You could randomly speak to an seo company on your phone right now and ask them what is Search engine optimisation and you could be on the phone for over one hour and still be puzzled"

The last line also needs improvement, "please do not hesitate to give us a contact and we can take care of for you."

This should read as "Please do not hesitate to contact us. Our team are ready to help boost the rankings of your website"


Overall, the article is good and the message is clear. But a SEO company needs to sound more sharper and more professional.

Seems fine.

A lot of points just thrown in without much lead-up/flow but it is what it is.

At least it's not an article with broken English.

OK the reason why I asked for some feedback is because its a spun article. I wanted to see if anyone notcied it was spun. I can generate about another 200 articles of this quality with about 85 - 90% uniqueness. With a little bit of modification i could get away with using these on tier 1.

Thanks for your time everyone.

Nah, it's terrible to be honest.

Spun article looks good, no doubt. It's the content that cannot be used on money sites. Only tier-1 max which is used to endure blasting from tier-2 sites

Cheers,
Commoner

article is just ok..

Commoner said:

Nah, it's terrible to be honest.

Spun article looks good, no doubt. It's the content that cannot be used on money sites. Only tier-1 max which is used to endure blasting from tier-2 sites

Cheers,
Commoner

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cheers! I'm not offended in any way after all its intended purpose was tier 1.