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Do You Want A Software That Shows You Step By Step How To Write Persuasive Copy!?

Discussion in 'Business & Tax Advice' started by IamNRE, Nov 11, 2015.

  1. IamNRE

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    Hello guys, I'm trying to decide whether or not I should create a software that will help affiliates, internet marketers and copywriters write better copy in order to; get more sales, get more leads, get more sign ups or just get more pay (to write copy for other people).

    Is this something you guys would find useful? Comment below please.


    You can learn more about what I want to do here; http://www.copyture.com


    Let me know your thoughts.


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    It seems like a really good idea.

    So how does it work? Does it come with templates or does it actually teach you how to write persuasive copy? Is it like taking a course? Or is it just a fill in the blank kind of thing?
     
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    I'll give you my 100% honest opinion, but you are not going to like it.

    You piqued my interest, but after looking at your website, my interest has disappeared.

    Good copy is not bold, italics and capitalization wherever you so choose. There's no emphasis needed in 80% of those on your website.

    Good copy is not irrelevant stock photos and a seven slide presentation where it could have been one long page and half the content.

    You need to have a couple more editing and review sessions of your product before you go live with it. And especially before you tout it as a tool to write better copy.
     
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  4. IamNRE

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    Ohhh yes.... thank you very much sir!

    Yes... give me this!^^ Useful criticism that I can work with!


    I'll see to that!
     
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    Thanks for your feedback.

    It will be a systemic process that you will have to follow. Each step will ask you specific questions. The answers you give will then help you put together your copy. When you're done you'll see all the answers you wrote down and you'll be able to construct that into a copy piece that will have 10 crucial elements that every copy should have.
     
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    With respect to you and your idea, I think it's going to be pretty tough to replace a good copywriter with software... unless your plan is to have more or less generic sales letters for a number of categories where the user fills in the blanks.

    On the other hand, if your solution offered a sales letter structure and prompted the user to write copy for, e.g., the headline, opening sentence, big promise, proof, value building, etc. parts of a sales letter and gave some examples for each section, that would be pretty cool.. and valuable for people that want to learn to write copy and/or don't have the $ to hire professional DR copywriters.
     
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    You are going up against some well established competition, might be a good idea to check this out for ideas ( Not affiliate link ) http://www.createinstantsalesletters.com/

     
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    Thanks for your comment.

    Had a look through their website. They are trying to solve the same problem, but I believe it could be solved better.

    Not seen enough demand for this product, so I'll put it on a backburner, but I'll get back to it later and crank out a nice little gem.


    Cheers
     
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    I'm coming back to this but I'm mobile and you are on the right track but I want to offer my input as a writer and copywriter. In fact, other things can be put in place.
    I'll be back when I'm not mobile.
     
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