Critique My Sales Page Please

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by ejm7788, Aug 18, 2010.

  1. ejm7788

    ejm7788 Newbie

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    My product is about songwriting

    hitwriting101.cm

    Any advice is welcomed its my first sales page and first attempt at copywriting

    I will set up an affiliate account later with commisions of 50% if anyone is interested. :) not trying to spam just want honest critique