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Critique My Sales Line For CB Product ...

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by Avada14, Feb 14, 2014.

  1. Avada14

    Avada14 Junior Member

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    Hi all,

    I am selling a CB Product and have a short line before the Link, I need this line to be short but informative. At present I am going with this:

    Watch Full Movies With Completely Unlimited Downloads! Simply Visit (Link Here)

    I know you don't know all the product details but how does that sound?

    Let's just say the product does of course have unlimited downloads, TV series and movies. Also, You can watch on devices such as iPad, Mobile etc, I've been trying to think of a way to fit that in, as it probably appeals!

    Thanks everyone :)
     
  2. Snajperist

    Snajperist Registered Member

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    How about "100% FREE Full Movies: Watch and Download Here!" or something similar?

    Why can't you split test a dozen of titles and pick the one which converts best?
     
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  3. Avada14

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    Thanks, That's A good idea - Would it be OK to say it's FREE? - When It's not? I will split test though, Thanks.
     
  4. mikeisright

    mikeisright Regular Member Premium Member

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    I would use "Download and Watch 100% Unlimited Movies - Click Here to Find Out How..." But as Snajperist wisely commented, I would split test at least 5 variations.

    Mike.
     
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  5. Avada14

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    Cheers both, I will split test and use both your ideas. :clap2:
     
  6. Phil Dunphy

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    You shouldnt use the word FREE if its not.

    About a good title I recommend checking your destination page.

    What I mean:

    If you put "Earn 5000$/month tomorrow" in the title

    and then it sends to a sales page or whatever that is says "how you can earn 3000$/month" that wouldnt be congruet.

    Just search in your sales page (destination page) for words and then when they click on that title and they see the same word into the destination page, conversions increase.
     
  7. Avada14

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    Great tip, Thank you :)
     
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    it sound more good if u write "watch HD movies 100 % free"