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Could use criticism on my sales page from my blog

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by sammyg1043, Jul 24, 2015.

  1. sammyg1043

    sammyg1043 Newbie

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    I created a dating blog specifically to promote books that I want to lock with cpa. I wrote a very thorough ebook on how to get laid on tinder and my original plan was to advertise it on facebook ads until I found out that they don't allow any adult content at all. I have been promoting people to download this free ebook in several forums, youtube, facebook comments and have received many clicks but no conversions whatsoever.

    This is my first sales page and I know I'm probably doing a thing or two wrong and would highly appreciate any of your advice. I also don't know the best way to advertise my book. I know I can sell it on amazon but I am trying to master CPA and I feel like making an offer thats hard to refuse such as the one I've made (full book and two freebies) for only filling in a survey should result in far more conversions than selling it itself.

    http://thedatingkings.com/get-laid-on-tinder-tonight/ (the comments are from my cousins. I figured maybe the reason why I'm not converting is because the ad doesn't look trustworthy and people may think the survey might contain a virus so I told them to add a few positive comments. Yeah yeah, the irony lol)
     
  2. andrecampbell

    andrecampbell Junior Member

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    I'd suggest doing AB testing to figure out the best sales page for you.
     
  3. HoneyHelper

    HoneyHelper Supreme Member

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    That will work!
    I think that will convert well ;)
     
  4. Josh Escusa

    Josh Escusa Junior Member

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    You need your affiliate link to be above the fold. Also the site needs work to look like a legit site.