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Could I get some feedback please?

Discussion in 'Blogging' started by marketspider, Mar 6, 2010.

  1. marketspider

    marketspider Registered Member

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    A couple days I posted my site and got some suggestions. Ive made some changes and could really use the feedback-especially concerning-Would you buy from this site or not-How does everything look-images?

    Mucho appreciated!
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    http://www.chewablevitamin.info
     
  2. thetraveller

    thetraveller Senior Member

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    1 - You could adjust the title for SEO purposes from Chewable Vitamins to let's say "Best Chewable Vitamins - Good Taste and Lots of Vitamins to Make You Healthy." but you can use whatever you want.

    2- The header takes too much of the page, in my browser is like half of the page, you can make it smaller.

    3 - The pictures and the text in the header are not crisp, i personally don't like this.

    4 - There are also other images in the page which look terrible, like the "satisfaction guaranteed" one.

    5 - The first square image in the page doesn't open in my browser.

    6 - Also in my mozilla browser the "buy" button doesn't open.

    7 - It's just my opinion, but overall the website doesn't look professional with all these old backgrounds,
    poor arrangement and image types..

    Sorry but i was frank, but i hope will help you.


    About the ad copy you could wait for answers from some more experienced bhw users, maybe there is room
    to improve your text for better conversion.

    Good luck !
     
  3. CallItLikeIseeIt

    CallItLikeIseeIt BANNED BANNED

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    get in touch with a more web 2.0 style man... your page looks like it came from 1997
     
  4. Daniel16

    Daniel16 Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    Content is good....

    its better to change the design of the site

    still it must be little attractive like latest websites not like the old one.....

    you can contact any site developer to design it

    Thanks