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Check Out My Landing Page Brothers!

Discussion in 'Making Money' started by trozma, Mar 1, 2012.

  1. trozma

    trozma Newbie

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    Hi bh members.

    I've just set up a landing page and would like your advice how to make it better so that it converts better.

    This LP is for my dating site that I've build just recently. The dating site targets single men and women who want to find a partner for a serious relationship, or even casual sex if they want, but mainly serious relationship.

    My plan is to put an ad on Facebook and link that ad to the LP. Check out the LP here: tinyurl dot com/7rw4v2r

    The LP targets men. I have another one which targets women, but it's basically the same, just the texts are a lil bit different and there's a guy in the picture instead of a woman.

    I want as many people as possible to click on the link 'Click here and register' on the LP and complete the registration. By looking at the LP, can you give me any advice or suggestions to make it better converting?

    I badly need this shit to work, as I can't risk loosing all my budget without having a positive ROI. Please help.
     
  2. trozma

    trozma Newbie

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    Anybody?
     
  3. TayaX

    TayaX Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    To be honest buddy, I don't find it anymore attractive than other LP of other dating site. Which means the convertion rate might be low; you should hope for a 0,3 to 0,8%
     
  4. Salezman

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    seems legit and to the point. Should update how it converts. How do you drive traffic?
     
  5. trozma

    trozma Newbie

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    Thx for the feedback. I'll drive traffic through Facebook ads. I'll see how it will convert and then decide what to do next. Sure, I'll post updates how it converts.
     
  6. CazuaL

    CazuaL Jr. VIP Jr. VIP Premium Member

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    "will end on 7.3.2012" I hope that's the American way of saying the date or your offer ends tomorrow for us people who live in the UK :)

    Looks very simple, very professional! Let us know how its goes.
     
  7. mfiii

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    Put less text and more photos. Also make a better design more web 2.0 standards and make them believe that you have something different to your network
     
  8. mrperfect314

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    Try drivng traffic through pof instaed of fb ads that would convert much better