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Check out my Clickbank Site, 1 sale

Discussion in 'Clickbank' started by rjd1265, Nov 6, 2014.

  1. rjd1265

    rjd1265 Regular Member

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    Need feedback please on a Clickbank Product I am trying to promote.

    I have used Bing ads and got a fair amount of traffic to my site but very few hops which indicates people are going to my site but not the vendor site from my page.

    270 visits to my site
    20 hops to site

    I also used FB ads and found the same result

    Other affiliates are getting this product to convert by using simple landing pages but for some reason mine is not so any feedback on my site/layout would be appreciated.
    I cant post my URL bc I am too new to BHW so here is a screen shot of above the fold.

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    Who wrote your copy?

    In my opinion
    1. The largest title is probably the least enticing line on the whole page
    2. Your numbers are SO specific, it makes me think you're lying to me. I can make $3,647 but $3,650 is out of the question?

    Lastly, maybe instead of just plainly writing "save 50% for the next three days" actually put a countdown timer on the page to really create a sense of urgency
     
  3. rjd1265

    rjd1265 Regular Member

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    so for the title should i say "How would you like to make up to an extrat $3,000 a month just by uploading pictures to the internet"?

    Thank you for the feedback btw
     
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    rjd1265 Regular Member

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    Can anyone else help me out from your past experiences? I thought I did it all correct.
    1. Call to action above the fold
    2. Pictures and text spread throughout
    3. not to wordy
    4. List building set up

    What am I missing? I have another health niche site similar to this that had a professional ad copy written and same thing there, 1 sale so I must be doing something wrong
     
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    fujing Junior Member

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    from a design perspective the site doesnt look very professional. Put yourself in the shoes of the visitor, does the site convey trust and authority to you?
     
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    Also, I recommend adobe muse if you want to create pro looking landers
     
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    rjd1265 Regular Member

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    that is just the text i used, it came out grainy. I will have a higher resolution made but first want to get more feedback.
     
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    I believe a video, with someone talking about the product would help there.
     
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    Thank you for advise.

    Do you think me having a video and then the sales page having a video is too much or is that what is working these days?
     
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    Wordpress has so many landing page themes. You can use the Hide Wordpress plugin so users cannot tell you are using it. You can also use Adobe Illustrator or Photoshop to spruce it up.
     
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    Those specific earning claims look way to scammy to me, I think round it off in the title to the nearest hundred then in the copy be more specific about the earnings and what not. The font looks kinda cheap as well I would focus some attention of the theme and the colour, try using blue for your theme or Font.
    Check this post out about colours, its pretty interesting and may help you in the right direction https://medium.com/@gregoryciotti/the-psychology-of-color-in-marketing-74f9b00834a2

    One thing I would add is a video, use some nice looking girl on fiverr and use her as a testimonial, try to get a few of these videos made and it may just help you out in your conversions.

    All the best
     
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    Your site is just the cold landing page yes?

    If so, it does not inspire confidence or attempt to build trust with your visitors, just a cold sell.

    This typically will not have a high conversion rate.

    A site with a minimum of 5 quality pages on your subject, with useful information, will have a much higher ctr and conv rate than just a cold landing page.

    Your presell site should build trust with your audience, and give away free information.

    You're on the right track but need to build something inbetween your visitors coming to your site and a call to action.

    Personally in your position, I would build 5-10 pages of a personal nature - ie "I was skint, lost my job, had no prospects, then I found this method..." and basically BS the visitor with a rags-to-riches story using your affiliate product. Make it believable and try to get your visitor to want to buy the product even before clicking on the link to the sales page. That would convert much better.
     
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    Slowly work on the site more and make it look more professional but heck, if its working for you keep it going buddy. Best of luck!
     
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    I think it looks ok. the price should be formated a bit nicer and the call to action button should be redesigned, it looks to pale and doesnt jump out enough.

    Also, the numbers you posted are low, I think you need to drive more traffic to it before you can decide if its working or not.
     
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    I would remove the price. The price is saying this is going to cost you money and by offering 50% off right now just cheapens it even further. All the pricing and offers should be on the vendor site. Your job is to tempt them to click the button. I know its going to cost me $37 so will I click or not, for most people I would say they wont. What you need to be saying is something like ...it's so easy even my 100 year old Grannie can do it - click here and see! Maybe that's not the best headline by a long way but your job is to warm them up and lure them in and don't try and sell to them on what is meant to be a pre-sales page.
     
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    Thanks all.
    I have redesigned the header to just normal, more clear text
    I will remove the price
    I went on Fiverr and am having a video testimonial done as well which will be in place of the image to the left of the opt in box

    anything else you can think of?
     
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    I made a few changes and added a testimonial video i got from Fiverr. anything else you can think of? See Below (I know the date is wrong but the site is not live)
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    That is someones clickbank affiliate link, my guess is your own!

    Reported.
     
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    Your an idiot, get off my thread.
     
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