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  1. Nut-Nights

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    I am using a rewriter, Can you guys tell me is it good article ? Going to use for web 2.0

    For many of us, trying to consume fewer calories can be very difficult. If you are someone that has a hard time feeling satisfied on little meals, or you just can?t seem to make any headway with your calorie count, there are a few ways that you can dramatically reduce how many calories you are eating without feeling the pinch. These tips are about some small switches that you can make to get some big weight loss results.

    1. Remove temptation.


    If you are someone that will go through an entire bag of chips without thinking, it?s difficult to look at that big bag and not keep reaching in. One of the easiest ways to control this is to make use of the smaller kid?s size bags. You?ll still be able to eat chips, but you will have that automatic portion control already figured out for you. The key is to keep as few of these bags around as possible, so that you don?t make up for what you?re missing by eating a bunch of small bags. Possible calories cut: 150 ? 600.

    2. Try tasty replacements.


    If you just have to have those salty snacks and the little bags aren?t cutting it, it?s time to find a different way to get your salt fix without eating too many calories. One of the easiest switches to make is to try some air popped popcorn, lightly salted. You can have three popped cups of this for what nine potato chips would cost calorie wise. This is an easy way to feel more satisfied and you won?t have to worry about eating unhealthy oils. If you can?t do without butter, try a light 1 second spray of butter flavored spray oil. It?s a lot easier to replace chips with popcorn than it is with celery. Possible calories cut: 150 - 600

    3. Get that dressing on the side.


    If you are eating restaurant salads and wondering why you?re not losing weight, the dressing is usually too blame. Restaurants slather salads with high calorie dressings. Look for a non-cream based dressing, or better yet, go with a vinaigrette. Get your dressing on the side, and dip in the lettuce. You?ll be surprised at just how much is left over. Possible calories cut: 50 to 500 depending on the dressing.
     
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    The article seems to have passed copyscape but it is already considered "Duplicate" being indexed in Google at BHW:

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    I see a couple of grammatical errors but it reds fine, especially if you're going to put it on a web 2.0.
     
  4. Nut-Nights

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    Yes i just want to know about quality.
     
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    What is the education level of target audience? The only reason I'm asking is because if you're targeting an "uneducated" audience, they would be less likely to care about any syntax errors or overused simple words and they may even feel more comfortable reading it that way. Let me explain the latter statement in further detail by using a quote from Mark Traphagen's Google+.
    Based on the information above, if you're targeting an uneducated audience, then the article is perfectly fine. However, if you're targeting an educated audience, they may find the repetitive use of "If you...", the overuse of synonyms for the word "small/few/little", and the syntax errors annoying.

    Edit: read Srb888's post below, although what I said still applies to readability.
     
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    Your re-writer has failed you miserably. The article has many copies on the net since few years (6 years at least):

    http://www.lmgtfy.com/?q=%22For+many+of+us%2C+trying+to+consume+fewer+calories+can+be+very+difficult.+If+you+are+someone+that+has+a+hard+time+feeling+satisfied+on+little+meals%22
     
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